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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 6:43 pm
by bookworm
My fave word to use here: Interesting. :wink:

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 7:22 pm
by DragonQueen
This is too much. What is going to happen next?!
Makes you wonder how much is the real Heero and how much is made up. :D

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 7:29 pm
by Tomorrow
You two are on a definite roll with this one. The writing is so beautiful, and the plot completely ingenious. I love Relena's reactions to the changes and her personal struggles with the "mission." They were depicted very well, with genuine feeling.

If you want my opinion (and nobody probably does), Heero isn't acting... he has a inculpable situation in which to let his true feelings for Relena show. He can love her, and there's no attached penalty to it--because everyone think it's him just "acting." :roll:

He's so sneaky.

Wonderful, WONDERFUL job you two. Keep those chapters coming.

Wow ....

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 10:13 pm
by NafX
This is fantastic!!!
I'm loving it ... :)
What a wonderful idea for a story too ...
Come back quick with lots more!!! :)

~Nat.

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 10:58 pm
by Elyn Yuy
I think I fell off the cliff hanger... :eek:

I'm back in my room...*pouts*

Write more!!! :D

This is getting good! :wink:

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 6:58 am
by Perfect Soldier
Sweet Jesus, I printed this out so I could read since I didn't have time to and was running late and it was like 8-9 pages long. I have a new and deeper respect for how much you actually write and how well you write everything. It's just amazing.

Zero

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 5:43 pm
by zapenstap
Lol! Thank you very much ^_^ Since Mizaya and I are working together, it doesn't take quite so long to do as when I write by myself, but yes, it does take a long time. my part was from like... 7pm or so until about 3 or 4 am on Monday? Mizaya? do you remember? Heh heh. My last chapter for my Evermore fic was 20 pages :eek: And now I'm falling behind on Desires of the Heart. :-? It never stops! Lol. But that's why I like reviews. ^_^ Thank you for writing one! Everybody, thank you very much! I squeal with happiness!

Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 9:39 pm
by melrose_stormhaven
Heero's not a good actor...at least, not for me!
GO MAN!
RAVISH THE GIRL OUT OF HER MIND!!!

Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 3:57 pm
by Darkwing
ROFL! The hawk! That's an hilarious touch! But the whole restyling was priceless!
Nice contrast with the hidden romance of the 1xR moments!
I truly can't wait to read more, girls! You both are making a very good work! ^___^

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 8:08 pm
by Bella
Loved it. And I will be waiting for more.