Blissful Ignorance

ahh twas a great chapter! and well worth the wait! I've probably said this before, but this chapter just showcased it so well. Your descriptions are so fluid, and easy to read, not to mention your conversations. Especially the one between Quatre and Dorothy, I can't imagine that had been easy to write.

I love the idea of Heero being Trowa's brother! and I wish Quatre would stop saying you worry too much, that way they'd discusse it furhter and I'd actually have some answers about his past ^_^

So who is this mysterious man in Dorothy's life? I figure he has to be someone important since you refused to mention his name. Also could it possibly be that Dorothy's present from her grandfather, is in fact Duo? could that be a possibility? *hoping* I think he'd make a fine gladiator.

I must say I feel kind of sorry for Zechs ^_~ he's like a lamb being lead to slaughter....though the actual 'slaughtering' I'm sure he won't mind.

Excellent story! I can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully with more Heero! ^_^)

Morganeth Taren'drel

Oh blah. You worry far too much, you know. This turned out well, though you might want to watch having large chunks of narration w/o some sort of internal or external dialogue. For instance, Dorothy's scene and thoughts had no break until Quatre finally showed up and spoke. You could have easily added in some internal dialogue in Dorothy's head.

I do like the Milliard/Noin interaction, and though I can't say I'm familiar with the Caesar/Cleopatra legends, I find their mutual, if hidden, attractions and competing desires to gain dominance over the other quite interesting.

And, as always, I'm looking forward to Relena perhaps "availing herself" of her slave.

*HUGS* Great job!!!

Okay... okay, so I've been a slacker and haven't written a review... but I'm pretty sure you know how I feel about this fic. But if you've forgotten...

This fic is a marvel. All the hard work and research that you've put into this story shows in each scene and word you've written. The interaction between Noin and Zechs was wonderful, and fit with most of the myths/stories written about Ceaser and Cleopatra I've read/heard.

So when does Relena get to have her slave do her bidding???

*smacks inner hentai*

What I meant is, when is the next chapter being posted?

Fantastic chapter... *pokes* so, get writing!!

::sigh::

Just beautiful...

And I appreciate the lengths you must be going to so that you can stay as accurate as possible to the setting.

^___^

Yay! Another chapter. I love this story so much. I especially loved the 4xD scene. To be honest, I like Dorothy. She's a pretty complex character and it's always fun to watch the sparks fly between Dorothy and Quatre.

As for the new Gladiator...ten bucks says it's a certain braided pilot who looks pretty damn hot in black...

Although it would be pretty damn funny if it were krusty. But I don't know about the loin cloth. *shudders* (bad mental image. Must replace with better one...hmmmm...duo in a loin cloth. Or Heero....Hell, why not all of them while we're at it... )

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers.

Fallen Angel

Erg... so very behind in replying... *blushes*

Morganeth wrote: Your descriptions are so fluid, and easy to read, not to mention your conversations. Especially the one between Quatre and Dorothy, I can't imagine that had been easy to write.

Thanks Morganeth! Actually, it was tricky to write, if only because I've written so little of Dorothy's character before. She sure is fun though. And I have a lot more in store for her too.

Morganeth wrote: I must say I feel kind of sorry for Zechs ^_~ he's like a lamb being lead to slaughter....though the actual 'slaughtering' I'm sure he won't mind.

Ah yes.. poor little lambikins Zechs. Noin is so going to have him twisted around her little finger. *grins*

blackrose wrote: This turned out well, though you might want to watch having large chunks of narration w/o some sort of internal or external dialogue. For instance, Dorothy's scene and thoughts had no break until Quatre finally showed up and spoke. You could have easily added in some internal dialogue in Dorothy's head.

You're right about that. And it was even more obvious to me when I went back and read the scene again. I don't know... I think maybe the sheer nervousness of making a hash of Dorothy's character made me shy away from too much internal dialouge? *hugs* I'll be sure to keep an eye on that now though.

blackrose wrote: I do like the Milliard/Noin interaction, and though I can't say I'm familiar with the Caesar/Cleopatra legends, I find their mutual, if hidden, attractions and competing desires to gain dominance over the other quite interesting.

And considering that I know your personal opinion on a certain obnoxious Epyon pilot, and lesser interest in pairings non-1xR... I'm going to take that as a huge compliment.

black rose wrote: And, as always, I'm looking forward to Relena perhaps "availing herself" of her slave.

Oh me too. Whoops... did I just say that out loud?

Loyce wrote: So when does Relena get to have her slave do her bidding???

*smacks inner hentai*

What I meant is, when is the next chapter being posted?

Sheesh... between you, Coley and Rose... forget inner hentai dear... it's the outer hentai Loyce I'm concerned about.

*hugs* Thanks Loyceykins.

Fallen Angel wrote: Yay! Another chapter. I love this story so much. I especially loved the 4xD scene. To be honest, I like Dorothy. She's a pretty complex character and it's always fun to watch the sparks fly between Dorothy and Quatre.

*hugs* Thanks Angel! Considering how much I love your fics, it means a lot to know you're following mine. Have you anything in the works at the moment? *pokes*

Dorothy does rock, doesn't she?! ^______^ 4xD was never a pairing that I had given much thought prior to starting CE, but now... I love them! They're just so not cut and dried, you know? There's so much room for conflict and clashes of temperament. Such fun.

fallen angel wrote: As for the new Gladiator...ten bucks says it's a certain braided pilot who looks pretty damn hot in black...

Is that Australian dollars? Hmmm... maybe I'll take you up on that bet. Or maybe not. Who can say. *grins* I'm much amused that readers are automatically assuming that the aforementioned Gladiator actually has a role to play in this story. I mean... he could just be some random slave insert...

I fear that perhaps everyone on this site just think they know me too well. Most reviews I got on ff.net got quite upset because I killed off Duo. Everyone here thinks I have an alterior motive.

Hmmm... so which readers are right?

Only time will tell...

Thanks guys!!

Love Mel

melodrama wrote: Most reviews I got on ff.net got quite upset because I killed off Duo. Everyone here thinks I have an alterior motive.

*crosses fingers for alterior motive*

wow!! that was really really good!! i really love reading fanfictions with Heero and Relena set on the past!! coz i think Heero will really look good ug medieval clothing or in a tunic!! *drool*

however, i find the few parts bewildering:

*i'm quite confuse who Dorothy's lover is? it can't be Quatre, can't it? because how can he get upset when he find-out that Dorothy is already bethrode?? and i don't think it's Trowa either, because how can he find it amusing when he notices that Quatre is quite destracted by 'Lady Dorothy'??!!! :-?


*i'm also confuse who Trowa was referring to with the line:

If it weren?t for her?

is it Relena? or is it Dorothy?? or is it Midii???!!! ohhhhh!!!! i'm going crazy!!!

*another thing, what was Dorothy talking about when she mentioned something to Relena that she heard something from lady Sylvia--who is acquainted to one of Treize's captains??

who's the captain? what's sylvia's relationship with him?? and what did she hear??....am i reading too much of it??

well anyway, i just hope you update soon!! this is really really great!! i definitely recomend it!!! well done!!!

As for the new Gladiator...ten bucks says it's a certain braided pilot who looks pretty damn hot in black...

i think the Gladiator is Wufei!!