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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 11:01 am
by Raye
That was so cute! Write more......(with fire in the background) I command you! lol I liked what Shigure said as well heheheh, he's such a nut but he's the joker of the show X_X Also, very well in character. Here's an A+++++, just show them to your teachers at school and they'll know it was me ^_~
Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 2:10 am
by ichigo15
I love this fanfiction!! i"ve read it so many times, but i still don't get bored of it~! I'm totally a Kyoru fan, but sometimes Tohru's OOC in some of them (especially the lemony ones) but this one was SO GOOD in their characters. Keep writing!! =)
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 2:56 pm
by LittleRooster
I* Crys*have nothing to say!
Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:33 pm
by ichigo15
That was so cute!!! I love this story. . . it's so. . . CUTE!! lol
Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:31 pm
by kyoru tomboy
KYORUS ROCK!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! SO KAWAII!!(super cute)
Like the last one here's my fav. couples
KyoxTorhu
:razz:
YukixMachi
RinxHaru
KuerenoxArisa
HiroxKisa
SakixKazuma (there's fanfics about that)
AyamexMine
ShigurexMitt
HatorixMayuko
........that's it! Whew! That was all of em'! (except Akito,Momiji(3rd fav char.), and Kagura who has no couples.)
Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 4:42 pm
by Tobo Castit
You captured Shigure PERFECTLY!
That was cute, and it made me smile. Kyo and Tohru aren't my favorite couple (Yuki forever!) But I really enjoyed this, especially because everyone was in character and the situation was completely believeable. The roof is an incredibly appropriate place for them to finally confess their feelings for each other.
Excellently done
I have to agree with WaterGoddess, you wrote this so well I'd love to read others by you!