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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 7:34 am
by Beck
I finally got a chance to read up on this. Tis sad but the emotions expressed throughout with all the characters fit well for what the fic was trying to get across. I too have certain ornaments since I was a child that brings back memories for me, so I really like that addition you had for Relena and her's, even though I'm sure her's was much more lovely.
I like the anger she feels towards Zechs too, she has a point about him not really being a "brother" to her aside from just being related by blood.
Once, long ago, he had kissed her head while she slept in an effort to see if that hair tasted as sweet as it looked.
My fav. line in the fic. Wonderful description.
Now to go and hunt Yuy down with my Nerf Bat of DOOM! A slightly different version than the original BOOM stick
Posted: Mon May 10, 2004 4:04 am
by wicked
Severely late in responding to the reviews but thank you one and all. It's all appreciated. Please note that my name is Wicked and that my mother did give me that name. Take that in whichever way you wish but it is very true. Okay I'll be honest in saying that when I was born I was given a different name, one that my mother calls me to this day but she surely doesn't hesitate to call me Wicked Child either. 
Angst is good. Angst is a daily thing for some people. I like angst. I like fluff (in moderation of course...severe moderation). I like comedy (especially if certain someone's are writing it). I was at a certain place in my life right then that made the fic go in the direction.
In all honesty it was supposed to end up happy and romantic with fluff and a tad bit, just a tad bit of comedy. Somehow though, it ended the way it did. And here I am, months later trying to write a second part but because this was written spur of the moment and with a certain mindframe, the second part isn't working the way it should.
I forgot how I made Relena feel toward her brother and what I wrote now no longer fits. Though I think I might be able to work it in regardless. As well as how I made it end on Heero's end. But I might be able to swing it also because it was just a generalization of what he did after leaving.
ACK! I'm having trouble. But I am wanting to continue this because I want it to end up happy because that was what I had intended in the first place. And just so you know, I'm doing this addition for myself because of my original intentions. I am not writing it because some people wanted it to be happy. I wanted it to be happy therefore I'm going to continue with it until I do make it happy and believable.
I need to print this one out though so that way I'll be able to remember what the heck was said and whatnot. ^___^ I don't want to go from complete angst and turn it completely into fluff. *sigh* Here we go again.
~Wicked