The Remains of Wing (one-shot)

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tomoyo
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Post by tomoyo »

Nice ...peacefull.. i like it :)
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Post by Stellar-Soldier »

Relena and Heero... the story was put out quite well in comparison to what the characters' emotions to each other were in GW, though I dont understand why Wing Gundam was chosen as a memorial piece, and not Wing Zero, or its Kai variant. But it doesnt really matter I suppose.
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Stellar-Soldier
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Post by Stellar-Soldier »

Perhaps they should make Wing Zero's remains into some sort of kiddy slide or something near the ESUN capitol of Brussels... hm.. now where did that come from I wonder.. but anyway.. yeah, I have to say that you pictured the way Heero would feel if he were to actually find the peace to his warlike self.
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Post by Wingnut »

Stellar-Soldier wrote:Perhaps they should make Wing Zero's remains into some sort of kiddy slide or something near the ESUN capitol of Brussels... hm.. now where did that come from I wonder.. but anyway.. yeah, I have to say that you pictured the way Heero would feel if he were to actually find the peace to his warlike self.
Well the wing binders perhaps could work out that way, but the rest of the suit would be dismantled to prevent any trace of the Zero system remaining.
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GundamVixen
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Post by GundamVixen »

OMG!! Took me 4ever to find this fic again!

It's BRILLIANT!! You're awesome at writing IC! I love that! and description!!

Just Freakin AWESOME!!

Will you write more? or do you have more? would love to read some more! lol!
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relena
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Post by relena »

Very good... Me too I agree for a sequel.... :bounce: :bounce:
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Post by lilac310 »

Hi! I'm back! If it's not too much trouble, then I'd really like you to continue..I'm on edge here!..Cheers!
"People who want to die, hurry up and die. You're wasting good air."
Professor G., Episode 24

Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25
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Post by GundamVixen »

I can't believe I haven't reviewed you yet!

Ok, I absolutely LOVE this one-shot!

Your characterizations are just BRILLIANT!

I just feel for Relena in this one! You managed to make my eyes water!

Would you consider a sequel?! or maybe a long going story of some sort? I really enjoyed this piece!
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Mellie
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Post by Mellie »

mm, wonderful. An excellent example of what their relationship is. Wonderful post war piece!
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kimlore
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Post by kimlore »

I enjoy reading this story. It has a nice flow to it and the characters are well written.
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