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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2004 4:13 pm
by deathroseaiko
cute. very cute. but in my case, i think you should've put more detail into it.
Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2004 6:41 pm
by Fatimai1
that was cool...

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2004 7:19 am
by Raspberry
Yeah! More
detail ! Cute lemon!

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:46 am
by sweet_me_beajai
i could only think of one word to describe this fic: Sizzling!!
the story starts from hot and ends up schorching! and despite the fact that as if its flaming, water is the last thing that you even bother to think about!!

:evil:
the sex-scene was greeeeeeat

, but it still amazes me that you are still able to maintain Heero's sense of protectiveness and tenderness towards Relena!!!*sigh* and that's hard to keep up, considering the situation that you put them into!
wow! you are one hell of a Heero-and-Relena Lemon Writer!

and i'll drink to that!--hold on a second, i don't have any dink, but hey who cares! i just read a very very and i mean very hot Heero and Relena fic, so sue me!

:evil:
keep it up girl!!

Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 2:30 pm
by KageOkami-Kogo
That was hot

Very nicely done, keep it up!
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:51 am
by fragilityfemme
Pardon me while I fan myself! I love this sort of lemon, where Heero plays the dominant, but it's painfully obvious that he's totally in love with his wife/girlfriend/lover, whichever Relena happens to be in the fic in question.
-Happy sigh-
Now I'm going to go get a cold drink of water!
