Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2003 4:52 pm
I'm hooked... I'm lost... You're the best, Rose.
Blissful Ignorance
A Heero and Relena Dedication site
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Murder by Moonlight: Chapter 1 part 1 - 16/16 Rated PG13
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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2003 7:40 pm
This is sooo good. I'm absolutely drooling....I can't wait for the next installment
Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 10:19 pm
Ooh... The suspense!!! I'm hooked to this as well!!Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 10:25 am
Part 8
I went back to my leisurely pose against the wall near the back door. Across the room and diagonal from my position was the entrance hallway leading to the dining room. At about ten minutes prior to my appointed meeting time with Merquise, I began pacing the circumference of 'Black Hall' towards that end of the room.
I was still several yards shy of my goal when the doors from the entrance hallway were thrown open, and the two meaty-fingered thugs (with half a brain shared between them) serving as 'guards' stood aside for a young man who stomped into the room like a toddler throwing a tantrum. I placed him right about twenty or twenty-one, but he looked years younger than that.
He had dark gold hair, not slicked back as was the fashion, but stringy and loose; it hung down over a large forehead with just a bit of a widow's peak. He was tall with a slight build and obviously came with money to spend because he was dressed better than anyone else in this part of the club. The kid ran a hand through his bangs and combed it out of his eyes. Light flashed on two gold cufflinks on either side of his left hand sleeve. They were large, flat ovals ? the type that usually bore initials, but I wasn't close enough to read them. But he looked vaguely familiar.
//to be continued//
I went back to my leisurely pose against the wall near the back door. Across the room and diagonal from my position was the entrance hallway leading to the dining room. At about ten minutes prior to my appointed meeting time with Merquise, I began pacing the circumference of 'Black Hall' towards that end of the room.
I was still several yards shy of my goal when the doors from the entrance hallway were thrown open, and the two meaty-fingered thugs (with half a brain shared between them) serving as 'guards' stood aside for a young man who stomped into the room like a toddler throwing a tantrum. I placed him right about twenty or twenty-one, but he looked years younger than that.
He had dark gold hair, not slicked back as was the fashion, but stringy and loose; it hung down over a large forehead with just a bit of a widow's peak. He was tall with a slight build and obviously came with money to spend because he was dressed better than anyone else in this part of the club. The kid ran a hand through his bangs and combed it out of his eyes. Light flashed on two gold cufflinks on either side of his left hand sleeve. They were large, flat ovals ? the type that usually bore initials, but I wasn't close enough to read them. But he looked vaguely familiar.
//to be continued//
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 10:30 am
Well, what am I supposed to say? I loved this! And the best part is that this is constantly updated which makes me feel warm and happy. ^_^ I'll be waiting for the next part.
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 6:45 pm
Ooh... Is that Quatre?? Or am I delusional here??
Can't wait to see more!!
Can't wait to see more!!
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 9:26 am
Part 9
His face was lean, and from his narrowed gaze and hurried gait, I figured the kid was supposed to be angry. But he had all the appearance of a good natured school boy who'd just had his milk money taken by a bully.
Damn. When did I get so old?
He made a beeline straight for the man in charge. As he passed near me, I recognized his face, but just couldn't place him. He looked like someone I'd seen, but not the same person I knew. The thought bothered me because I never forget a face. And I knew he had to be important because he was approaching Zechs after having burst in on this joint.
And was still alive.
//to be continued//
His face was lean, and from his narrowed gaze and hurried gait, I figured the kid was supposed to be angry. But he had all the appearance of a good natured school boy who'd just had his milk money taken by a bully.
Damn. When did I get so old?
He made a beeline straight for the man in charge. As he passed near me, I recognized his face, but just couldn't place him. He looked like someone I'd seen, but not the same person I knew. The thought bothered me because I never forget a face. And I knew he had to be important because he was approaching Zechs after having burst in on this joint.
And was still alive.
//to be continued//
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 10:17 pm
Cliffie!!! Evilness!!! Want to see more!!!Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 12:57 am
I love it, it's so very noir..... I can only see it in black and white in my head.
Good choice of time frame too.
Good choice of time frame too.
Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 3:29 pm
Oh, this is getting better and better. Is this Quatre by the way?