LOL - tell me there is more! I need to know what happens when he had the spiked coffee! This was such an amusing short story, I was smiling all the way through - especially when he was considering which was better; sex with Relena or his first shot of coffee.
Excellent work!
most highly agree with kmf.....there are no other words to describe it....
I don't like the new stuff with avatars... ....But I'll live. Heero on the other hand might have a few objections....MWHAHAHAHA!!! Your's trully..(wink)
Poor Heero and his difficult dilema... hee heee.... I enjoyed that, particularly because I know several people whose sole source of energy is coffee. I love the image of Relena recovering from her shock when he told her they were getting married.
The good writers touch life often. The mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. The bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies.
- Ray Bradbury
It could be worse, you could be a character in a John Steinbeck novel.
I want to die as my Grandfather did, peacefully in his sleep. Unlike the three other people screaming in the car.
This was very well written, congrats!! I loved the way it turned out, how you've made it fun yet light. Ohh, and I almost fainted with laughter when Heero was considering having sex with a beautiful woman or... coffee. Lol. Perfect, absolutely perfect!
"No eye could be clearer or brighter than the eye that had nothing to create, nothing to do but gaze" (The Deacy of the Angel --- Yukio Mishima)
"Where are there laws regulating an angel?" (The Decay of the Angel --- Yukio Mishima)
Fun fun fun. I love a smexy little one-shot. I'm inspired by it. Now I want coffee (and probably sex (with heero?) too if I could have it... damn.... tmi..... sorry). But I'll probably write instead.