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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:31 pm
by krzkid
who's the girl and when do we get to meet her????
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:44 pm
by perfectpeach
:evil: no! nononononononono! i feel sick as soon as i saw that line! 'I met someone else!'
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:02 am
by lilac310
i echo krzkid's question....yea, when do we meet the girl and who is she so that we can beat her up for seducing Heero!....lol...please post an update!
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 1:46 pm
by zapenstap
lol, i intended this story to be a one-shot, so you'll probably never meet her! If she even exists... I think it's kind of ambiguous and I can't remember what I was thinking in that regard. Anyway, I'm happy you liked the story enough to request an update, but I don't think I'm going to turn this one into another novel. It's too similar to Desires of the Heart as is. In fact, it was sort of a one-shot attempt at an idea that I later expanded into that much longer story.
Anyway, thank you very much for the reviews! I appreciate it.
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 4:33 pm
by krzkid
now i have to go read desire of the heart...great there goes my calculus grade...j/k i love your writing
Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:10 am
by Gundam Girl
Hm, I've read this somewhere before, but I'm not sure where. I thought about it when I started reading it, "Doesn't he say something about someone liking guns?"
"...Yep."
I'd love to see where this goes!
Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:12 am
by Gundam Girl
Oh! And I don't think my e-mail went through at the ML for some reason, but I AORED "Desires of the Heart." I was not totally shocked at how it ended, nor was I unsatisfied. At first I thought differently, but now...I like it. ^_^ Good job, Zap!
Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 3:18 am
by Oyuki
NOOOOOOO! why, oh why? the torture! the pain! i've still got that thing in my eye!!!!! i so wish you'd continue this. i've read it on ff.net before. i hope you add mroe to it!

Re: [Out of Touch]
Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 2:43 am
by DeadPoet
zapenstap wrote:
“I like you!” Relena cried. The world seemed to become Space around her with the utterance..."
I just LOVE this part! I could imagine Relena's outburst here. Raw and pure emotions.
Yes, that's right! If you really love someone, who cares if you have nothing in common. I hate HEERO here so much. He is such an idiot for leaving Relena. How could you, Heero?!
Relena likes, correction: loves you-even though you have nothing in common.
I do hope this has a sequel or something. Please? ^_^
Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:58 pm
by Sovereign of Silence
WHAT?

heero u bastard don't u se the love of ur life * points at myself* relena sob!!