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krzkid · Post by **krzkid** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:31 pm

who's the girl and when do we get to meet her????

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:44 pm

:evil: no! nononononononono! i feel sick as soon as i saw that line! 'I met someone else!'

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:02 am

i echo krzkid's question....yea, when do we meet the girl and who is she so that we can beat her up for seducing Heero!....lol...please post an update!

zapenstap · Post by **zapenstap** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 1:46 pm

lol, i intended this story to be a one-shot, so you'll probably never meet her! If she even exists... I think it's kind of ambiguous and I can't remember what I was thinking in that regard. Anyway, I'm happy you liked the story enough to request an update, but I don't think I'm going to turn this one into another novel. It's too similar to Desires of the Heart as is. In fact, it was sort of a one-shot attempt at an idea that I later expanded into that much longer story.

Anyway, thank you very much for the reviews! I appreciate it.

krzkid · Post by **krzkid** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 4:33 pm

now i have to go read desire of the heart...great there goes my calculus grade...j/k i love your writing

Gundam Girl · Post by **Gundam Girl** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:10 am

Hm, I've read this somewhere before, but I'm not sure where. I thought about it when I started reading it, "Doesn't he say something about someone liking guns?"

"...Yep."

I'd love to see where this goes!

Gundam Girl · Post by **Gundam Girl** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:12 am

Oh! And I don't think my e-mail went through at the ML for some reason, but I AORED "Desires of the Heart." I was not totally shocked at how it ended, nor was I unsatisfied. At first I thought differently, but now...I like it. ^_^ Good job, Zap!

Oyuki · Post by **Oyuki** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 3:18 am

NOOOOOOO! why, oh why? the torture! the pain! i've still got that thing in my eye!!!!! i so wish you'd continue this. i've read it on ff.net before. i hope you add mroe to it!

DeadPoet · Post by **DeadPoet** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 2:43 am

zapenstap wrote: “I like you!” Relena cried. The world seemed to become Space around her with the utterance..."

I just LOVE this part! I could imagine Relena's outburst here. Raw and pure emotions.

Yes, that's right! If you really love someone, who cares if you have nothing in common. I hate HEERO here so much. He is such an idiot for leaving Relena. How could you, Heero?! Relena likes, correction: loves you-even though you have nothing in common.

I do hope this has a sequel or something. Please? ^_^

Sovereign of Silence · Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:58 pm

WHAT?

heero u bastard don't u se the love of ur life * points at myself* relena sob!!

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