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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 7:12 am
by Darkwing
Argh!
It's since Sunday I'm searching for a moment to review this chapter! I'm sorry it took me so much.
Even this is great! You described all their actions after the storm in a perfect way. I'm amazed by your writing skills!
And now? You're saying we can taste some more tortures...I wonder what are you planning this time! I can't wait to read more!!
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 1:44 pm
by elyra-chan
Ohh! Getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter. You'd better update soon, or else... Seriously, I love this. Such a unique concept written so well. Keep it up!
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 10:00 pm
by Elyn Yuy
WingGirl wrote:What! You ended it there! That's not fair!
*pokes*
sigh
You punish Heero more than I do.
Great job!
Elyn Yuy
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 11:33 pm
by illiterate
Please tell me there is going to be more to this last scene, cause that was a wicked bad cliffhanger.
But aside from my grumbling over the lack of lemons, I have to say that this is one of the best fics I've read lately. You know alot about being on the open sea and you've put that knowledge to good use. Yes very good use, now where's the lemon.
Err sorry for the lack of words on how well you've done with this fic but keep up the good work. And don't forget about the lemon.
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2003 7:53 pm
by blackrose
I caught the reference. I repaid the unconsciously done "homage" to this story in Medley. I'm sure you can find it.
The ship, for lack of a better word, STUFF is mostly over my head. I wish it wasn't, but it is. Other than that, lots of cute things, and yay! Relena's finally having her way with him. HUZZAH!!!
*hugs*
Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 10:29 pm
by Sovereign of Silence
this is getting better n' better they're WILD!! YAY!!
getting a little "FREAKY" ... yea well see ya later
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 12:33 am
by trekkiexb5
I'm moving this to the front in preparness for the next chapter.