War Dove wrote:
Wow, this was really well written. Like Beck said it had good balance.
I most certainly hope this isn't the last lemon you ever write.
Thank you. I shall write another lemon in the near future, I promise.
Miyuchan wrote:
I can't believe I missed this when it was posted last week! *smacks self* What a wonderful story. Hot, steamy, angsty just the way a lemon should be. Heero always gets what he wants in the end anyway.
Hahaha, be easy on yourself. Yes, I believe Heero has suffered a lot, why not let him enjoy some, right?
elyra-chan wrote:
This fic is beautifully written, in just the right tone to make it sensual, but not pure smut. This has a deeper meaning to it, and I love it. Keep up the good work!
PS Write more lemons! This was great!
Your words are very much appreciated, Elyra. I will write more lemons... But, hey, you have to keep the smooth flow of the updates of 'Not my Cup of Tea'!!! OR else!
blackrose wrote:
I was wary... You said you THOUGHT it was fluff, but the rating finally won me over (yeah, yeah, Rose is a sucker for good 1xR lemons, her secret is out). So, now, I'm here procrastinating for a minute because I REALLY don't want to work on Shameless right now (but I'm down to 6 days), and huzzah! This was just what I needed! Not TOO fluffy, but everything in the right amount.
Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!
In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons.
I believe that when people read 'Lemon', 'Lime', or 'NC-17', they are instantly tempted... I'm a sucker for lemons also... though, it's hard to find 'good' lemons out there, that's why I was weary of writing one, I thought people would be picky and would flame my butt to Hell and back...
..................harrassment is a felony, Rose, so back off!
And about Shameless, you must finish that on time, or I'll be forced to turn the tables on you.... it's not a threat, but a promise.