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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 12:47 am
by ice princess
They don't write 'em like that anymore....all I can say is woah. That was sensual brilliance. That song already sends thoughts like that through my head, and your style painted the fantasy beautifully. Wow. That. Was. Amazing.

I need to go take a cold shower.

~ice princess

Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 8:47 pm
by Andrea
Kari wrote: I like the story, I like the song , I like the lemon and I agree with freelight your writing is fantastic. You should try for another lemon.
Make more stories please.................
See me begging
pretty please......
Hahaha!! Wow, well, this IS my first lemon... who says there won't be a second... or a third?? And about other stories... well, I'm working on a comedy fic... I find it hilarious, but maybe it's just me... related to Heero and Relena, and an apartment, and rats and fire... (huh!?), but, yes.... AND, Somewhere Out There... the angst is KILLING ME! Just don't give up on me... gimme time...
lilac310 wrote: I say, ur doin an awesome job in this songfic!
Well, this is a one-shot, basically... and there won't be a sequel.. I think... but, nothing is set in stone... oh, well... thank you!! Hahaha!
ice princess wrote: That was sensual brilliance. That song already sends thoughts like that through my head, and your style painted the fantasy beautifully. Wow. That. Was. Amazing.
Yeah, I totally agree with you... that song has power of its own. <blush> I'm really liking the response to this fic!!!!!

Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 10:44 pm
by War Dove
Wow, this was really well written. Like Beck said it had good balance.

I most certainly hope this isn't the last lemon you ever write. :D

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 2:48 pm
by miyuchan
I can't believe I missed this when it was posted last week! *smacks self* What a wonderful story. Hot, steamy, angsty just the way a lemon should be. Heero always gets what he wants in the end anyway. :razz:

Great job!

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 6:30 pm
by elyra-chan
Ooh, lemony fresh! I agree with everyone else. This fic is beautifully written, in just the right tone to make it sensual, but not pure smut. This has a deeper meaning to it, and I love it. Keep up the good work! :wink: :D :salute:
PS Write more lemons! This was great! :-P

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 6:30 pm
by blackrose
I was wary... You said you THOUGHT it was fluff, but the rating finally won me over (yeah, yeah, Rose is a sucker for good 1xR lemons, her secret is out). So, now, I'm here procrastinating for a minute because I REALLY don't want to work on Shameless right now (but I'm down to 6 days), and huzzah! This was just what I needed! Not TOO fluffy, but everything in the right amount. :)

Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!

In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons. ;)

*hugs*

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 8:32 pm
by elyra-chan
That's the spirit, rose! :wink:

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 9:51 pm
by WhiteWindRRose
yay! great fic.
it's been a while scince I've read a lemon this good.
have you thought about a Rel POV? hee hee.
i'm unhealthily addicted.
3 cheers for 1xR lemony goodness!!!!!!!!!! :lol:

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2003 4:19 pm
by Andrea
War Dove wrote: Wow, this was really well written. Like Beck said it had good balance.

I most certainly hope this isn't the last lemon you ever write.
Thank you. I shall write another lemon in the near future, I promise.
Miyuchan wrote: I can't believe I missed this when it was posted last week! *smacks self* What a wonderful story. Hot, steamy, angsty just the way a lemon should be. Heero always gets what he wants in the end anyway.
Hahaha, be easy on yourself. Yes, I believe Heero has suffered a lot, why not let him enjoy some, right?
elyra-chan wrote: This fic is beautifully written, in just the right tone to make it sensual, but not pure smut. This has a deeper meaning to it, and I love it. Keep up the good work!
PS Write more lemons! This was great!
Your words are very much appreciated, Elyra. I will write more lemons... But, hey, you have to keep the smooth flow of the updates of 'Not my Cup of Tea'!!! OR else!
blackrose wrote: I was wary... You said you THOUGHT it was fluff, but the rating finally won me over (yeah, yeah, Rose is a sucker for good 1xR lemons, her secret is out). So, now, I'm here procrastinating for a minute because I REALLY don't want to work on Shameless right now (but I'm down to 6 days), and huzzah! This was just what I needed! Not TOO fluffy, but everything in the right amount.

Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!

In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons.
I believe that when people read 'Lemon', 'Lime', or 'NC-17', they are instantly tempted... I'm a sucker for lemons also... though, it's hard to find 'good' lemons out there, that's why I was weary of writing one, I thought people would be picky and would flame my butt to Hell and back...

..................harrassment is a felony, Rose, so back off!

And about Shameless, you must finish that on time, or I'll be forced to turn the tables on you.... it's not a threat, but a promise.

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2003 4:22 pm
by Andrea
WhiteWindRRose wrote: have you thought about a Rel POV? hee hee.
i'm unhealthily addicted.
3 cheers for 1xR lemony goodness!!!!!!!!!!
Haha, well, Relena's POV is already out there, a fic titled 'I Love You'... but, as for a lemon in Relena's POV, I'll have to think that up...