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dark-angel
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Love this SO much
My theme song is Adieu I'm Noin from GW.
I'm Rei from Nerv. My stereotype is Tough Boy.
"... She stopped. Had it been her heart they failed her, or had her eyes, veiled in the mornfulness that lies over all the wild things on earth, seen the hopelessness of longing that will find out sometimes even a savage soul in the lonely darkness of its being?" Conrad, The Heart of Darkness
I'm Rei from Nerv. My stereotype is Tough Boy.
"... She stopped. Had it been her heart they failed her, or had her eyes, veiled in the mornfulness that lies over all the wild things on earth, seen the hopelessness of longing that will find out sometimes even a savage soul in the lonely darkness of its being?" Conrad, The Heart of Darkness
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Miroku
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That was sweet [sniff] and i'm not crying, i just got something in my eye!!!!
As we go thru this "bump" in the road, I know in my heart that all will be okay, especially knowing that you are there to help me through this. I love you- Mom.
Funny how only a few sentances can turn a rotten day into a good one.
Funny how only a few sentances can turn a rotten day into a good one.
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Dreamingdreams
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So very moving and so touching. I loved it was good!! -
Nausica?
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That was beautifully written, really it was. The way you kept repeating those three lines (she chose to stay... she's happy wondering), it hammers home Kagome's desire to be near Inuyasha even though she couldn't claim him for herself. * sigh * Love makes you do crazy things, ne?Actually, I'm new to Inuyasha fandom, and you know what? I couldn't have found a better fic to begin a brand new obsession
Keep up the awesome work...
* muah *
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because one doujinshi is never enough
because one doujinshi is never enough
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elyra-chan
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That was absolutely beautiful. You truly captured Kagome's feelings, giving us a glimpse inside of her head. Your portrayal of the characters is wonderful and the writing style suits it perfectly. I loved this. Please write more like it in the near future. 
"If complete and utter chaos were lightning, then he'd be the sort to stand on a hilltop in a thunderstorm wearing wet copper armor and shouting 'All gods are bastards.'" -The Color of Magic, by Terry Pratchett
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
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Waking Dreamer
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WaterGoddessX
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Hitomi Lei
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That was one of the most perfect peices I've read in a long time.
It felt so real...you striped their circumstance down to it's bare bones and then let us feel just what it's like to be in that kind of relationship.
You showed me what it feels like to wait and wonder.
And I know someone out there will kill me for saying this...but I don' think it needs a sequal...Continuing it will take away some of it's power...
Not to say that if you make a sequal I won' read it...because I will just to see what new emotion you bring to your work.
*sigh* I've been inspired! Thank you very much.
It felt so real...you striped their circumstance down to it's bare bones and then let us feel just what it's like to be in that kind of relationship.
You showed me what it feels like to wait and wonder.
And I know someone out there will kill me for saying this...but I don' think it needs a sequal...Continuing it will take away some of it's power...
Not to say that if you make a sequal I won' read it...because I will just to see what new emotion you bring to your work.
*sigh* I've been inspired! Thank you very much.
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