Eternity In His Hand 17/17

J Alberghini · Post by **J Alberghini** » Tue Jul 22, 2003 4:00 pm

Hooray! It's finished! Not that I wanted it to be over, of course, but you know what I mean. Wonderful story from beginning to end. I loved it, as everyone else did.

ice princess · Post by **ice princess** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 12:47 am

I am actually crying. Full-force, box-of-tissues crying. I NEVER do that with fics. Never. I feel like I'VE got some damn sword popping out of my chest my heart is buzzing so much. Wow. This story is beyond words. Goldberry, you can write like the dickens. No, you can write like no one else I've ever read. Not even published authors can write so precisely, so honestly, and so emotionally full and supple as you have. You got that?!?! Emotionally full and SUPPLE. Yes, supple. Not many writers have their work called supple. Maybe not many want it, either. But damn it, your work is supple. There was no thread left untied, no emotion glossed over, and nothing overblown. The pacing was breathtaking. Wow. That is all I can say. Wow. With a powerhouse of a novella like this beautiful story under your belt, you deserve a break. That is, until you decide that millions of people would give their rose-seal rings to buys books like this on store shelves. I work at a book store and you should see that crap we sell. You really need to write professionally; you've got the talent, and you would blow the competition out of the water. That's just my two cents. I'm still reeling from the effect this story had on me. Wow. Thank you for your beautiful imagination and impeccable skill.

~ice princess

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 4:13 am

Ahhhh...beautifull

thanks for sharing

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 3:56 pm

*bounces up and down* Ooh......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Great job, nee-chan!!! This has definitely become one of my favorites!!!

*glomp*

Sissi · Post by **Sissi** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 6:42 pm

I have to agree with everyone who has reviewed so far. This story was amazing; the character were not OOC, there was enough angst, suspense and romance and there was even a lemon! Just kidding! But, anyway, I just loved this story, it is one of my favourites, that's for sure! Also, it made me kind of like Utena, though Heero's role is Utena, a girl...-.-;;

Okay, I'm happy that this chapter was out, but I amslo sad that it is over. Awwww....well, unless you bring us some one-shots, I don't think I'll have many complaints...^^

By the way, are you sure "Tickled by the Tide" is a one-shot? Because I just love this one!!!!

Good luck with your future works! ( not that you need it, but anyway...)

Goldberry · Post by **Goldberry** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 7:17 pm

By the way, are you sure "Tickled by the Tide" is a one-shot? Because I just love this one!!!!

Actually, Sissi, Tickled By the Tide might actually evolve beyond a one-shot! I've been pestered consistently about writing more for it and I just might, if inspiration strikes. I wrote TBTT after a trip to Savannah and I'm going down there again in a few weeks. Who knows? Perhaps the experience will get the my brain spinning again. Don't worry, I'll keep everyone informed about what I'm up to. ^_~

Thanks Sissi!

Sissi · Post by **Sissi** » Thu Jul 24, 2003 7:20 pm

Well, after reading your reply, Goldberry, I just can't express help but my hopes for you to get your inspiration back. Whoever has been pestering you about TBTT is now my hero ( or heroine ). I am delighted to hear that this wonderful one-shot ( for now ) may evolve into something else, because the plot is already great and people like me just cannot get enough of Heero/Relena along with a lot of romance. From what I remember of this fic, my favourite part was when Heero stretched out his hand as if grabbing her kiss, making Relena smile at him. That was the sweetest thing I've ever read! I'm serious!

Anyway, I'm not pushing you, that's just my opinion and hopes. ^^ I hope you'll have a nice time staying at Savannah. You did a wonderful job with Eternity in His Hand and you certainly deserve a break. ^^

Sissi

Shawny · Post by **Shawny** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 1:51 am

I loved this fanfic! Thank you for writing it!

I've been reading it since your very first chapter, but this is the first time I've reviewed. *sheepish* Sorry! I promise to review more in the future.

In fact, I loved this story so much, I was inspired to draw a fanart of it. It's not very good. So I hope you don't mind. The fanart is here http://blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/albu ... pic_id=208.

Goldberry · Post by **Goldberry** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 10:08 am

Shawny, sweetie, it's beautiful! *wacks Shawny over the head* What do you mean it isn't good, silly! I love it! *huggles pic* This is the first donated fanart for this fic! Yay! I have my own of course but they shall remain hidden until they are better. ^_~

Thanks so much, dear! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my fanart section of my website, either, so other people can drool over it.

*drools*

Thanks!

Berry

Shawny · Post by **Shawny** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 10:49 am

You're welcome, Goldberry. *rubs head*

*blushes* Thanks for the praise. I'm very critical about my own stuff. But if you like it, then it's not as bad as I feared! Of course, you can add it to your fanart section!

Again, great fic!

Blissful Ignorance

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