Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 8:55 am
*super glomps*
It's about damn time... *giggles and ducks knife* I was just kidding. Gez... some authors are touchy.
I've said it once and I'll say it again, this is a wonderful chapter. The story itself is beyond amazing... actually, amazing doesn't even begin to cover it.
Of course, I got teary eyed at Hilde remembering Duo... *strangles Mel* He's not dead, tell me he's not dead! *watches Mel turn blue in the face* You're not going to say anything, are you? *Mel sticks out tongue and Loyce lets go* Fine. Be that way.
The 2xH you've written here screams 'Side Story', but I'm not going to push it... *tries to plant the seed in Mel's mind*
The 1xR moments were beautifully done, along with Dorothy, who is just the way I pictured her in this setting. Maybe she'll end up finding love along the way.
I love the scene with Zechs and Noin. I can't wait to see where you take it from there.
Well, now I must be off and leave a long over due review on FF.net.
*HUGS* I'm glad the trip to Italy sparked your muse into working again. Maybe I should have Eli or Stefy tie you down in front of the Colosseum so you can continue to produce such wonderful chapters.
Have a safe trip home!
Love,
Loyce
It's about damn time... *giggles and ducks knife* I was just kidding. Gez... some authors are touchy.
I've said it once and I'll say it again, this is a wonderful chapter. The story itself is beyond amazing... actually, amazing doesn't even begin to cover it.
Of course, I got teary eyed at Hilde remembering Duo... *strangles Mel* He's not dead, tell me he's not dead! *watches Mel turn blue in the face* You're not going to say anything, are you? *Mel sticks out tongue and Loyce lets go* Fine. Be that way.
The 2xH you've written here screams 'Side Story', but I'm not going to push it... *tries to plant the seed in Mel's mind*
The 1xR moments were beautifully done, along with Dorothy, who is just the way I pictured her in this setting. Maybe she'll end up finding love along the way.
I love the scene with Zechs and Noin. I can't wait to see where you take it from there.

Well, now I must be off and leave a long over due review on FF.net.
*HUGS* I'm glad the trip to Italy sparked your muse into working again. Maybe I should have Eli or Stefy tie you down in front of the Colosseum so you can continue to produce such wonderful chapters.
Have a safe trip home!
Love,
Loyce