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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 12:44 am
by shadowcat
an interesting idea and a great beginning! i'd like to see how you finish it torn!!
-Shadow
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 5:42 am
by cHiMes
great torn and since when have i ever agreed? (referring to what she said before the fic in the yellow writing....)
i like the ida and as ur beta reader i say there are no mistakes except for u not writing faster
cHiMes
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 8:08 am
by freelight01
Ok, you definately got my vote!!!!!!!!!! I love it, I can't wait to see what Pesphone (did i spell that right?) Opps, i mean Relena does next!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Heero won't be mean to her. Get the next chapter out soon as i want to know what is going to happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 9:55 am
by tornin1/2
after reading Rose's post in the Writer's section, for my next one i'm gonna try not to use many adverbs, though i do know i'll slip up one way or another.
Thankya all again.
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 4:50 pm
by Elyn Yuy
Lilac pretty much said what I was going to.
Nods wisely
Keep it up!!!!!!!!
Elyn Yuy
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 6:43 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Hooray! I love Greek mythology so much! And the fact that is is really now Relena and Heero only makes it that much more interesting.
Three cheers for you, torn!
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 9:20 pm
by War Dove
An actual myth I'm familiar with.
Please, please continue.
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 7:12 pm
by Neoen
~is all jealous of torn's great idea~
You better write more! I'm all sulky now, and can only be consoled with more of the story....so write more soon.
Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 11:25 pm
by Kiyoko
This is a very interesting fic! I've always loved Greek mythology and I'm glad you've decided to write this! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work! I can just imagine Heero in a sexy toga with armor...mmmmmmmm
Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 12:24 am
by Kanya Barton
Ooooooo, nice! I love Greek and Roman mythology! I was like the only 3rd grader that would check out books about the love affairs of Zeus and other gods...not that I knew what all that was at that age or anything...well, I can't wait for the next installment!
Peace out!