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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 10:19 pm
by Primus2021
Once agen I'd like to comment but this time it's on chap. 6 with 5xS which is also called a LIMON even if it was a cuple of paragraphs it was still a limon, & now back to Chap. 6 I'll post another Reply later.
Sincerly: Primus2021
Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:03 pm
by Primus2021
I whant a Sequel, this was great.
Stort for me I know but my Computers been shuting off on me Sorry.
Sincerly: Primus2021
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:59 pm
by darky
This story is so cool. Love the way you write and the lemons. Very elegantly detailed, I must say. Hope you write more stories, don?t waste that talent you got there.
[All I want to do, thought Quatre as he sliced through the middle of a Scorpio, is find Dorothy, save the world and finish up the day with a nice cup to tea. Is that too much to ask?(Chapter 9)] *My favorite line in the story. Kept me laughing for almost 5 minutes*
Darky