Once agen I'd like to comment but this time it's on chap. 6 with 5xS which is also called a LIMON even if it was a cuple of paragraphs it was still a limon, & now back to Chap. 6 I'll post another Reply later. 
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				Primus2021
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This story is so cool. Love the way you write and the lemons. Very elegantly detailed, I must say. Hope you write more stories, don?t waste that talent you got there.
[All I want to do, thought Quatre as he sliced through the middle of a Scorpio, is find Dorothy, save the world and finish up the day with a nice cup to tea. Is that too much to ask?(Chapter 9)] *My favorite line in the story. Kept me laughing for almost 5 minutes*
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						[All I want to do, thought Quatre as he sliced through the middle of a Scorpio, is find Dorothy, save the world and finish up the day with a nice cup to tea. Is that too much to ask?(Chapter 9)] *My favorite line in the story. Kept me laughing for almost 5 minutes*
Darky
