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Post by Litia-sama »

:eek: Gah! Nooooo! Go away, Pagan! Shoo, shoo!

Just when I think this fic can't get any better, you go and have Heero make fun of Zechs. "Are you sure that?s just water in there?" Not to mention, "Erase erase erase." :razz: Ah, I'll be laughing at that for days.

Cheers for chapter 23!

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Post by Melville's Best Friend »

*walks into the Featured Author Forum*

New chapter of Missing by a Mile huh? Never read it....Mayhaps I should....CHAPTER 23?!?!?!!? Heck no!!!!

*grumbles about staying up to read from chapter one, as she's never read the fic before*


WARNING: LIME

Hmmmmmmmm.........*Think un-hentai thought, think un-hentai thought....*

Well....Maybe if I take a quick look see......

*reads*

.....Wow.....*reads more*

Wow.

*reads and reads and reads*

I know. What I. Must do.


*walks into the Blackrose's forum*

Missing by A Mile. Click.


Chapter one....



Can you believe it? 23 chapters in a night and a bit of the wee hours of the morn. ^_^

But all I can say is: you have proved you're the best once again.

No, that's not true. I can say more, but bear with me. 23 chapters of not saying anything is killing me.

You catch Heero and his blasted automaton personality perfectly. As well as the slight jokes that ensue from the majority of the crap he says. Him being funny without realizing it strikes my fancy.....quite a bit, I might add.


I love how Dotty's actualy OK in this fic. I also love how they're all married, and although I tend to hate it when fics are about Duo and Hilde and their...*ahem*...."lifestyles", I love how you've worked with it. I mean, I absolutely love it.

I love Trowa. I found myself going "YES!! Take her, baby! Go! Go! Heero missed his op! You go!!!Woooot!!!!!" (As long as Trowa gets some action somewhere, somehow, I think I'll be good. ^_^ He can come to my house. :D )

But then...Heero had to go and be all.....*sigh* charming....The freak.

One thing that worries me is his inability to act of his own accord. He gets all his info from his pals. HELLO?!?!?! Earth to Heero? You know what to do!!!! Come on pal! Use your heart!!!!

I mean...It's like....Cyrano or something. ^_^ No one knows what I'm talking about....

Rose, I am in awe. I love it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderfully done. Masterfully, even.

Ans I shall thank your beta, too. ^_^ Thanks Stella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are an award-winning team, you two!!!! Keep up the good work!
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Post by Morrighan »

Melville's Best Friend wrote: I mean...It's like....Cyrano or something. ^_^ No one knows what I'm talking about....
I do!! I've read that play! Cyrano was funny, but my Goddess, he's very much like our dear Yuy in that aspect that you're referring to. Those idiots. :D Oh well. We love them anyway.
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Loved it! . . . But it was too short. *Falls over* How could you? And at such a cliffhanger! Nope, nope, not fair, and undeserved of your poor readers . . . you must hurry with the next chapter! Please?

Heero is just funny when all the blood leaves his brain and goes down . . . there. ^_^; Now forget I just said that and the images it causes. (Poor Zechs. ^_^ The one time Heero has to tease him . . .) You know, I was mad at Zechs for walking in when he did, then happy when Heero was allowed to leave. But then Pagan had to ruin it too! I was laughing the whole time with Pagan, though. ^_^ The butler is tougher than he looks, certainly.

You know . . . *Poke* There are two fake kidnapping plots for Relena. They wouldn't be planned for this same night, would they?
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Post by aku_ryo »

oh geez what the hell has pagan gone crazy!!!
and i really liked the milliardo talk with heero bit, it seems a lot more believable than the old i have a grudge against you and dotn forget it ever thing thats always around ....

ps yay another chapter

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Post by shadowcat »

yay!!a new Chapter. yay they are together, how long did it take them...about 23 chapters. damn Pagan, damn him hard. if he messes the wild night of Heero and Relena i am going to be really REALLY upset. and i thought he was the calm and gentle butler, calm and gentle my ass.ha, told you there is a difference side of the pacifist old man, he is evil inside i tell you, evil.
Great chapter Rose!!!Its sooooooooo cute in the brginning, Heero, keep your trousers on man, wait till your in the bedroom geez. man, i never knew Zechs had a sence of humour, its so hilarious!!!
Ohh, i'm gonna sit here and wait for the next chapter, i've already bought a pillow ready, good things take time.

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Post by Beer-monster »

Sniff...you are all cruel. :cry:

Why all the cliffhangers in these fics...You all like watching me suffer don't you. Evil Rose :evil:

Love the chap, funny and interesting. I must suggest that Heero shaves of Paygan's mustaches coz it looks tacky and would be classic revenge.

Now post chapt 24 before I report you for cruelty to Beer-monsters
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Post by Pious Knight »

Ah, Pagan. You always were too sneaky for your own good. Although he does seem strangely and inexplicably capable of kidnapping Heero. Perhaps... Pagan is Doctor J in disguise! No? Well, I'll try again...
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Post by Faye Faye »

Screw Lime...WE WANT THE LEMON!!! sorry my perverted side is showing, but I just can't wait for it to finally happen!!! I love the story!! Keep writing!
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Post by silverose »

Hi!
I'm brand spankin new to this sight, but I started reading your story on ff.net and I wanted to tell you what a fabulous writer you are. I love this and evry story I've read by you. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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