Caveat Emptor - Chapter IV

Stella · Post by **Stella** » Tue May 27, 2003 12:37 pm

Another awesome chapter, Mel! I really love how you've done Quatre's character, not wishy-washy or passive at all, but very witty and intelligent (ok, and I do enjoy picturing him in a toga, I admit it)

Loving the Heero/Relena tension, too & can't wait to see how the rest of the plot unfolds with the rest of the characters ^_^

*adds image of Quatre in a toga to happy place*

Stella

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Tue May 27, 2003 1:39 pm

shadowcat wrote:It has been a pleasure reading it and i cannot wait for more chapters. i shall sit here until it comes.

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz* snoreszzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*

I'm so pleased to hear you're still enjoying the story Shadow *pokes SC awake with stick* Don't get too comfortable there though... Chapter Five is not too far away at all

aku_ryo wrote:so is heero the one that trieze lost on teh battlefield

Hmmm... an interesting theory Aku... is he indeed?... *scratches head*

aku_ryo wrote:how long before out poor boy regains his conscoius memeories and even then what will happen - a soldier content as a slave i think not...

Well... it can't be tooo long I suppose... especially when there are so many other fun ways to torment our beloved Heero. Content being a slave... certainly not... LoL... especially when he's used to taking whatever he wants

stella wrote:Another awesome chapter, Mel! I really love how you've done Quatre's character, not wishy-washy or passive at all, but very witty and intelligent (ok, and I do enjoy picturing him in a toga, I admit it)

*glomps stella* Thanks oh fellow partner in crime! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story and especially Quatre's portayal. Quatre in a toga... why am I not surprised that you like that

stella wrote:Loving the Heero/Relena tension, too & can't wait to see how the rest of the plot unfolds with the rest of the characters ^_^

Stay tuned... LoL... the following chapter contains Hilde's background, the whereabouts of Duo (double checks fall out shelter for that one) and the first official meeting of Milliardo and Queen Lucrezia. So I hope you'll enjoy!! *hugs*

Thanks guys!!

Love Mel

aku_ryo · Post by **aku_ryo** » Wed May 28, 2003 12:26 pm

that wasnt an answer... is he the one trieze lost? eh eh eh???akuuuuuuuuuuuuu

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Tue Jun 03, 2003 6:51 pm

YAY!!!!!! I can't wait to hear more!!!!! However, I just wish that Heero and Relena will have a private moment together....AS IN REALLY PRIVATE......(grins evilly)...hehehe..but I guess it's too early for that mushy stuff.....what in the WORLD am i thinking.....lol

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Fri Jun 06, 2003 4:59 pm

lilac310 wrote: YAY!!!!!! I can't wait to hear more!!!!! However, I just wish that Heero and Relena will have a private moment together....AS IN REALLY PRIVATE......(grins evilly)...hehehe..but I guess it's too early for that mushy stuff.....what in the WORLD am i thinking.....lol

*grins* thanks for the review Lilac... I'm really pleased that you are still following along with the story.

Hmmm... a private moment for Heero and Rel huh? *hides chapter six behind back* What an interesting idea... *coughs* Yes, what WERE you thinking, you evil, evil person

You've been talking to Rose, Loyce and Stefy haven't you? *grins*

Well... chapter five is almost ready for posting... but unfortunately Heero is being a little pigheaded and not co-operating... so it's slowed me down a bit.

Mel - *points at Heero* It's HIS fault!!

Heero -

oh yeah... it's my fault... if you'd just skip the touchy feely stuff and go straight to the lemon we'd be fine... but noooooo... you insist on plot... *walks off muttering*

Mel - *glares* fine fine... just for that Heero, you don't get a lemon scene. Period.

Relena - Nooooooooooooooooooooo

*coughs* Anyway... thanks again Lilac!! Hope you continue to enjoy!!

Love Mel

Kanya Barton · Post by **Kanya Barton** » Sat Jun 07, 2003 10:06 pm

Wow! This is a really great story! I'm really liking it a lot! I can't wait for the next chapter! Peace out!

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Tue Jun 10, 2003 6:26 am

Kanya Barton wrote: Wow! This is a really great story! I'm really liking it a lot! I can't wait for the next chapter! Peace out!

Thanks for the review Kanya!

I'm really pleased that you're enjoying the fic so far. I'm working really hard on finishing chapter five as we speak, so I hope you'll continue to follow along!

Love Mel
(who is getting ready do some in the flesh research of Rome in less than a month with her favorite Italians Stefy and Darkwing, and is giddy with anticipation)

AngelOfDeath · Post by **AngelOfDeath** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 5:16 pm

I'm addicted hopelessly just like the rest of them....

Ah historical drama, action, romance - as soon as it was out of the modern age and so nicely depicted as well - I couldn't say no.

Morganeth · Post by **Morganeth** » Sat Jun 14, 2003 5:47 am

Great chapter!!!

I love the way you ended it, now I want to know everything that happened to get Heero in the position that he is now!

please post more soon!!!!

Morganeth Taren'drel

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Tue Jun 17, 2003 1:13 pm

AngelOfDeath wrote: I'm addicted hopelessly just like the rest of them....

Ah historical drama, action, romance - as soon as it was out of the modern age and so nicely depicted as well - I couldn't say no.

I'm very pleased to hear that AoD! Thank you, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the rest.

morganeth wrote:I love the way you ended it, now I want to know everything that happened to get Heero in the position that he is now!

Thanks for the review Morganeth! I'm so pleased that you continue to enjoy. Now as to how Heero got in that position... well... basically, he was... oh! oops! nearly gave the plot away!

Thanks again guys... more to come very soon!

Blissful Ignorance

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