Missing by a Mile ch 22/? Romantic Comedy

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Numena
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Post by Numena »

Oh Joyous occasion!!
A new chapter!! Yay! :bounce: :D
I'm so excited! I feel like I've been waiting years to read the next chapter. Which I haven't of course, I'm exaggerating WAY too much. But this was the first GW fic I ever read, so it's kinda special and I guess I get rather impatient, waiting for new chapters of it. :D
It was, as always, wonderful, amazing, and such fun to read! (and well worth the wait! especially since I rather like fluff :wink: ) Can't wait for more!
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Litia-sama
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Post by Litia-sama »

I have been waiting for this chapter for so long. And you know what?

It was worth it. :D


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Post by Pious Knight »

Wonderful, as usual.
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Post by melodrama »

He'd heard people say that in order to dance, you just had to let the music lead the way. He'd also been given the rather ludicrous advice: get lost in the music. But dancing, to Heero, was nothing like that. His mind had a built in metronome that kept time for the rest of his body.
LoL! Ah Rose... you so hit Heero's personality dead-on in this chapter. And in such an amusing fashion. Of course, if you had just hit Heero in the head instead, it might have proved a quicker way to knock some sense into him :wink:

Lovely combination of humour and not too sappy sap by the way. The hayride scene was really sweet but insightful at the same time.

Thanks for a fun read! Well done! *hugs*

(I honestly don't know how the hell you manage it though. Workaholic :-P )

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Post by Kristy »

Wow! I am so happy you updated! This is fantastic, as always. Heero was such a good sport. I always felt that Heero and Relena made good dancing partners. The emotion between the two was very intense esp at the dinner and the Hay ride; It wouldn't be very Heero and Relena other wise. It was nice that you had them talking about what it would be like if things were differnt. I always wondered if they felt that way. In any case it was very nice!
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Post by raine_yuy »

moooooooore!!!!!!! i found this story in ffn first and was so excited about reading the next part. rose, you rock! eeek!!! now i'm so impatient for the next part. i'm glad you're not a lazy author like i am. hehe. come on, come on...where's the next chap? :bounce:
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Post by Darkwing »

:D :D :D
For once it seems Heero is doing the right thing! I'm happy for him.
He's a jerk sometimes, but he also deserves a pause every now and then. After all if he's too tired there's no point in torturing him, don't you agree? :wink:

Great job as always, boss!!
I'll be tuned for your next post!!

Hugs!

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Post by blackrose »

Numena wrote:Oh Joyous occasion!!
A new chapter!! Yay! :bounce: :D
I'm so excited! I feel like I've been waiting years to read the next chapter.
:P :P :P
Numena wrote:But this was the first GW fic I ever read,
Wow. It floors me to hear that since there were so many fics out there when I started writing. I've always considered myself as somewhat of a late-comer. Of course, 2.5 years later....
Numena wrote:It was, as always, wonderful, amazing, and such fun to read! (and well worth the wait! especially since I rather like fluff :wink: ) Can't wait for more!
Heero needed some fluff. *nods nods* He may not admit it, but he really needed it. :D

*hugs* Thanks Numena! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it. I always get a little worried...
Litia-sama wrote:I have been waiting for this chapter for so long. And you know what?
It was worth it.
ACK! *glomps* THANK YOU!!! *sighs with relief* I really appreciate it. :)
Pious Knight wrote:Wonderful, as usual.
You know, if only writing the darn fic was that easy. *hugs PK* Thank you.

Love,
Rose

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Post by blackrose »

melodrama wrote: LoL! Ah Rose... you so hit Heero's personality dead-on in this chapter. And in such an amusing fashion. Of course, if you had just hit Heero in the head instead, it might have proved a quicker way to knock some sense into him :wink:
*giggles* Darkwing left me the reboot hammer. ;) Maybe I should try it. *snicker snicker*
Melodrama wrote:Lovely combination of humour and not too sappy sap by the way. The hayride scene was really sweet but insightful at the same time.
Thanks, Mel. I really appreciate that. Sap/Fluff is some of the hardest stuff to write and have it carry. I always worry that, especially where HEERO is concerned, who is not a fluffy bunny type at all, I'm overdoing it. *sigh*
Melodrama wrote:Thanks for a fun read! Well done! *hugs*
*hugs* Thanks sweetie! Now, where is ch 4 of CE? ;) Oh, and you haven't forgotten the OTHER fic, have you? ;)
Melodrama wrote:(I honestly don't know how the hell you manage it though. Workaholic :P )
DON'T SAY THAT! *adjusts Queen of Slackerdom sash* You'll ruin my rep. :P :P :P

And don't forget. I abused you terribly while you were here.... :D
Kristy wrote:Wow! I am so happy you updated! This is fantastic, as always. Heero was such a good sport. I always felt that Heero and Relena made good dancing partners.
*giggles* Yes, he was a good sport, wasn't he? And not only good dancing partners.... ;)
Kristy wrote: The emotion between the two was very intense esp at the dinner and the Hay ride; It wouldn't be very Heero and Relena other wise. It was nice that you had them talking about what it would be like if things were differnt. I always wondered if they felt that way. In any case it was very nice!
Thank you! I'm really glad the emotion came across, and I, too, always thought that they would wonder... Relena probably more so than Heero because she has so many people depending on her while Heero's role is a lot less visible. He could and has disappeared from view on different occasions, whereas she always has the pressures of her position. At least in this fic...

*hugs* Thanks so much for reading, Kristy! :)
Love,
Rose

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Post by blackrose »

raine_yuy wrote:moooooooore!!!!!!! i found this story in ffn first and was so excited about reading the next part. rose, you rock!
Actually, I'm terrible at the electric guitar. The piano, maybe, but it's not generally an instrument in rock music. Unless you're Billy Joel or Something Corp--

Mel: *whacks Rose*
Rose: HEY!
raine_yuy wrote:eeek!!! now i'm so impatient for the next part. i'm glad you're not a lazy author like i am. hehe. come on, come on...where's the next chap? :bounce:
You and Mel! *adjusts crown* Have you forgotten my queen of slackerdom status?

And the next chapter is mostly done, I think. I need to re-read it and see if that's still where I want to end it, but for the most part it's there. Ch 24 on the other hand.... Is mostly an outline. :P to it.
Darkwing wrote:For once it seems Heero is doing the right thing! I'm happy for him.
Duo: *sighs with relief* Me too.
Darkwing wrote:He's a jerk sometimes, but he also deserves a pause every now and then. After all if he's too tired there's no point in torturing him, don't you agree?
Hmmmmmmm, no. There's always a point in torturing him! MWAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Thanks, Darkwing! And don't worry. If Yuy gets out of line, I'll be sure to use the reboot hammer. ;)

Love,
Rose

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