Caveat Emptor - Chapter III

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Post by aku_ryo »

kick ass another chapter and one more to read yet yay!!! im so pleased yo ucontinued this series, i wasnt sure you would after the first one - it seems so many good series go uncompleted and i really liek the idea and all and im rambling now but imr eally really tired.. yawm .. okay im off to read the next part now....

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Post by luvspook »

OMG! Mel, this TOTALLY made my day! :D

Wow, where to start...

First off, Heero is just so menacing-I LOVE IT!!! He's like a caged animal. The way he attacked Catherine had me borderline hyperventilating. It was great!

Secondly, I love the way you describe the encounters between Heero and Relena! So vivid! It gives me goosebumps just reading it...the way he senses things about her. It's so wonderful!

Lastly, I just gotta say again...I LOVE the reference to Treize's horse, Epyon! That is so clever!

*hugs*

I am sooooooo ready for the next chapter now!

BRING IT ON!
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Post by Gundam Girl »

Go you, Mel! Another fine chapter. I really REALLY want Cleopatra!Noin (yes?) to go kick some Caeser!Milliardo tail!
-GG

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