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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2003 7:44 pm
by Nausica?
Nicely done... And you're right: The way you portrayed Heero and Relena interacting after EW is realistic. I mean, what's to do but attempt a normal life after war?
I also like the fact that Relena's not trying to throw herself at Heero. She seems really mature now, and I was surprised I liked the change in her quite a bit. From the looks of it - or the way I read into it - Relena's "just friends" attitude kind of through Heero for a loop. An imbalanced Heero... how intriguing...
All in all, lovely piece. I look forward to reading more from you.
- Naus
Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2003 8:01 pm
by Andrea

dumbstruck....
oh, wow... that was a totally unexpected change... the role reversals between Heero and Relena were brilliantly executed and I applaud you. I LOVED Relena's attitude and her realistic points of view as opposed to her idealistic ones than in an era of peace are completely useless.
I second MBF, there IS a second chapter... right? RIGHT!?!

You HAVE to write more!!!
Andrea
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2003 1:16 am
by lilac310
This is wonderfully written!!!

Every word in your story screams reality, which I think is very good. Hope to hear from you soon!

Oh, by the way, I like the way Heero said "I'll be around"....It's pretty cool! HEERO ROCKS!!!!!!

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 6:22 pm
by Kiyoko
AW this was such a sweet story! I love how Heero is vulnerable in the bed. Sweet little encounters like this makes my heart melt! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.