Short Story: Watching You

[RienaYuy]

Ok, this is a short story just to warm up on. I have an uber-long fanfic for ya'll coming up after christmas. Heck, mabye even before is school doesn;t kill me. I am totally in LOVE with Heero and consider myself a die-hard fan, just like most of you! COnstructive critism is welcome, I am trying to become an author someday!

Watching You

The rain thundered hard upon the motel rooftop. A girl with golden tresses had just stepped out of the shower, a white towel wrapped around her tightly. She went over and sat on a hard, lumpy bed and began to dry her hair. She hummed a song she had heard long ago, still caught in the corners of her memory. Her dazziling blue eyes stared at the floor, trying to make the dark stains on the carpet morph into a face she barely knew, but one she could never forget.

OUtside the hotel a figure stood hidden beneath a large black cloak. He was looking up into the window in which a blond-haired beauty could be seen drying herself. THe figure's body tensed as he took a step forward, his old emotions fighting to turn away. The boy with shaggy brown hair pulled back the hood of the cloak to see more clearly. The heavy rain instantly soak him.
"Relena..." he said in a low, unmoving tone. He watched as she changed into a nightgown, not turning away to give her privacy. After all, she should have closed the drapes. His whole body tensed as he saw her bare back. She slipped on the silk fabric as if it had been made especially for her, it clung to her tightly. Or mabye the water all over her body caused this. Heero could not take it anymore, he had to go to her. It had been 4 long years since she went into hiding and he had finally found her. He did not plan to let her go.

Relena reached over and turned of her lamp. She walked over to her window and looked out into the pouring rain. A flash of lightenng as bright as the sun illuminated the street below. A dark figure stood looking up at her. She jumped back and looked down again but could make nothin out of the darkness. With another flash of lightening she realized that the figure was gone.
One name crossed her mind as she closed the drapes, but she knewit wasn't him. He had made himseld very clear that December evening four years ago. He did not love her.
She went over to the bed and slid beneath the scratchy blankets. Her silk, short gown was the only thing around her that was comfortable. She laid down on the pillow and closed her eyes, not hearing the door open.

Heero slipped into the room silently. He had taken off his cloak and only his wet face and hair revealed that he had been outside at all. He closed teh door and looked down at Relena, the woman he finally realized that he loved. He watched as she breathed in, and then out. Her chest rising and falling gracefully, it was the most beautiful thing Heero had ever seen.
He walked around to her bed and knelt down, his face a few inches from hers. Her body was easily seen through the thing sheets but he fought the urge to grab her into his arms. Every last bit of his training and strength fought to keep control.
He reached out a shaking hand. He looked at it and raised an eyebrow. He had never seen himself shake like this before. He touched her cheek with a rough hand. Relena whispered his name as if in a dream.
"Relena.. I am here," he whispered. He watched her eyes flutter and then open. She stared at him as if he were a ghost. Before she could scream Heero leaned forward and kissed her. HIs kiss was rough at first, his inexperience and terror showing. But when he felt her return his kiss he relaxed and the kiss became more passionate, there tongues twining as one.
Heero pulled back and looked into her eyes. She studied his face and raised her hands to touch his cheeks, his hair, and then his lips. "Oh...Heero..." she whispered, tears stinging her eyes.
Heero could not stand to see her cry and tried to gently wipe away her tears. "Relena...I love you too" he said, the last of his soldeir's resolve breaking.
Relena's eyes widened as he said this and Heero seemed to collapse forward, actually human emotion flowing through his body and showing on his face. Relena watched the transformatin with fear and amazment. Her Heero had come for her and had given her the most precious thing to him: his soul.
Relena slid out from beneath the blankets to the floor in front of him and gently eased his head to rest upon her chest. Heero breathed heavily and laid there, closing his eyes. Relena held him close to her, letting him have time to adjust. "I love you Heero... everything.. it will be better now. I promise," she whispered into his hair as she tilted her head downward.
Heero turned to face upword and stared into her angel-like face and deep ocean-blue eyes. "You are mine Relena. I will never let anything happen to you" he circled his arms around her waist protectivly and fearfully, as if he were afraid that she would dissapear at any moment.
"I know Heero." she said smiling down at him, realizing that all of her dreams, as well as his, had just come true.

[Eienvine]

Aw, that was sweet! Nice little romantic moment. Welcome to BI, Riena.

[amateur_storyteller]

very well done! : )

[RienaYuy]

Thanks! ^_~ Glad to be here. I seriosly love this site!

[RelenaDorlinYuy1]

that fics is great !! better then mines tho am still working on them damn college :evil:

[Ainohikari]

very nice! Brought a smile to my face, even though I am in a Bah Humbug mood thanks to my mom.... Christmas nazi.... has to have everthing clean and perfect and..... Opps! Anyway, gorgeous! Absolutely gorgeous.

[ealpha_scorpio]

Hey that was really nice & sweet... [/img]