See the girl

[angel222]

See the girl sitting on the bench in school
alone as she wishes and the questions lies in every mouth
what?s wrong with her? she?s so not cool
but they?ll never find out
lost al purpose, forever out of place
fallen of a pink candy cloud
a child of loneliness in the never ending space

See the girl riding home alone
letting go of control facing the sky
eyes as cold as stone
as she breathes the air and for a second she can fly
she looks years older
mumbling wishes when her words cry
her soul so much colder

Whatever they say about her
it?s not true
think they know her
but they don?t have a clue
cause when you think you know her
she changes again

See the girl restless, lost in her own house
crying in her nook
forever is this emptiness her spouse
and everything has this distant look
as her life is slowly spend
caught in the depths of a sad book
she knows death it the only end

Whatever they say about her
it?s not true
think they know her
but they don?t have a clue
cause when you think you know her
she changes again

[Perfect Soldier]

I liked this poem a lot, it reminds me of how I used to feel when I was in junior high. It's a very in depth poem, and I can respect and understand that deeply. Keep writing.

Zero

[Egg Drop Soup]

You placed a lot of thought and detail in this one. Good job.

~EDS

[Lady Casper]

I agree a 100% on what EDS said.

So good!