The Song Sung in Silence (CH 0/??)

Mission briefing: KGB threatening code name WHISPERED candidates. Believed target: Kaname Chidori, 16, Tokyo, Japan.
Mission status: Critical<br>
Mission personnel: Sergeant Magjor Melissa Mao; Sgt. Kurz Weber, and Sgt. Sousuke Sagara, Arm-Slave specialist; Mission objective: To protect Kaname Chidori from KGB kidnapping plot, without alerting the Japanese gov't or target as to the identity of super-secret military organization, code-named MITHRIL. <br>
Kaname: Why are you following me?!
Sousuke: It's just coincidence.

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The Song Sung in Silence (CH 0/??)

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Note from the author: I?ve seen the entire FMP anime series as well as its sequel Fummofu. I am currently in the process of collecting the manga, but as I don?t fluently read Japanese I haven?t yet finished it. This story is based off a combination of all three.

Warnings: This story will eventually contain harsh language and depictions of sexual acts. If you are too young, by law, to read this material, please stop immediately.

Disclaimer: I?m a student. I don?t own FMP, but like everyone I wish I did. This is totally non-profit, and if you try to sue me you?ll just be wasting everyone?s time, because I?m poor. :salute:

Main Characters: Chidori Kaname (High School student/whispered), Sagara Sousuke (military specialist for Mithril), Kurz Webber (Mithril solider), Melissa Mao (Mithril solider), Teletha Testarossa (Captain of Mithril?s ship the De Danaan), Morimoto Arisu (Pop-idol Arisu Amaya ?Alice Night Rain?), Kamiguchi Takashi (A new student)

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Prelude

Kaname stared blankly at the sheet of paper in her hands. It was an offer from an American university, in New York, for a full ride if she was to attend; something Kaname knew was unavailable if she were to attend Tokyo U. She had only sent that application in on a dare after losing a bet with Kyoko.

The very thought made her frown, especially considering the bet had involved Sousuke. It was a subject with which Kaname was already very insecure. If she couldn?t place her own feelings, how could she possibly ask that emotionally inept, war-mongering maniac?

Kaname dropped the letter and curled up into a ball, snuggling her pillow close. Everything was happening too fast. Not even a week ago Sagara had received an order from Tessa to return to the De Danaan and be reassigned. In less than a month her entire class would be graduating. Kyoko was content on attending Kyoto Tech., President Hayashimizu had passed the Tokyo U entrance exams the year before (somehow), Mizuki was attending a smaller university in Hokkaido (so she could follow Shira) and even Kazama was going to a military university in Okinawa (where he would finally pilot an AS).

Kaname felt like she was the only one being left behind, and it was extremely uncomfortable. All her life she had been ahead of the crowd and self-sufficient. She had never needed to depend on anyone to pay for her bills or do her work or watch out for her. Except Sousuke?

Kaname shut her eyes tight, took a deep breath and held it. Every time Sousuke came into the picture this happened to her. Everything would tense, her heart would speed and her face would flush. She pictured in her head the first time he left her, and how that felt. Now?how could it be any better? No, it could only be worse, Kaname decided, picturing Tessa?s smug face in her head as she got Sousuke all to herself. That was not a pleasant thought, and it hacked Kaname off. As a person Teletha was okay, but when Sagara Sousuke was involved Chidori Kaname hated her completely. In a fit of anger Kaname threw her pillow at the wall and yelled.

?Baka!? She cried out and then slumped off the bed onto the floor, pouting. This was the behavior she had always been trying to fix. It was her American side and as she could imagine, completely unattractive to any guy in Japan. However, it was something that came out very easily.

Suddenly her cell-phone rang, causing Kaname to jump. She crawled over to it and looked at the number. It was Kyoko. Biting her lip, Kaname picked up the phone and greeted her friend.

?Kana-chan,? Kyoko said in her cute little voice, ?I have a surprise for you! Can you guess what I have??

?Eh?? Kaname made a confused noise, trying to readjust her emotions to the mood of her friend. ?If I could how would it be a surprise??

?Mou,? Kyoko made her own sound, but this was one of disappointment. ?You?re not being fun Kana-chan. They?re tickets to the Arisu Amaya concert this Sunday!?

?Kyaa!? Kaname perked up immediately with explosive excitement. ?You?re kidding! I thought it was completely sold out! How did you get them!??

?My mom,? Kyoko said, and Kaname could practically hear her smile through the phone. ?Would you like to go??

Kaname shrieked with delight. ?Are you kidding me? Of course!?
?Good,? Kyoko said. ?See you tomorrow!?



?What do you mean you can?t come?? Kaname?s shout filled the hallways, startling a large majority of the students who were within a mile of the shoe lockers. ?You love her music! We?ve both been waiting to go to one of her concerts for years and when the chance finally comes you can?t go? Kyoko, they?re your tickets!?

?What is it?? Sousuke demanded, running up with a gun drawn.

?Kana-chan,? Kyoko sweat-dropped as her friend beat the over-protective boy to bits, ?I?m giving them to you. I didn?t expect my grandfather to get sick and neither did you. However, I?d hate for those tickets to go to waste, so please take them and go. In exchange you can promise top buy me one of her CD?s and tell me what happened.?

?Oh Kyoko,? Kaname said, dropping Sousuke, ?But what will I do with the other ticket? I can?t ask Mizuki to come because I don?t have one for Shira, and no one else I know likes her music.?

?Have Sagara-san come along,? Kyoko said with a devious smile.

Kaname stopped for a moment, blushing deeply. She imagined the crowd around her being packed tight and Sousuke?s body pushed up against hers. Her mind wandered further and the audience started dancing to the beat, causing his arm to brush against her breast?

?Chidori?? Sousuke broke the fantasy, startling Kaname.

?AH ha ha ha ha ha!? Kaname began to scratch her head and laugh loudly. ?Come on, Kyoko, He wouldn?t appreciate Arisu Amaya?s music, that machine-gun maniac is more likely into the sound of gunfire.?

?Arisu Amaya is the Japanese-American Idol, correct?? Sousuke asked with a serious face, as if reciting facts off a sheet, but it still managed to take Kaname off guard again.

?You know her music?? She asked, extremely confused.

?During a mission to the Philippines, my unit and I became stranded on a small island. While there we ran short of supplies, and were eventually left with no civilian supplies save a radio. I heard her music for the first time, there.? Sousuke nodded his head very solemnly. ?It was very comforting to have a connection to civilization when everything else was lost.?

Kaname gaped and then grit her teeth, ?Sousuke??

?Yes??

?You are just too weird.? Kaname leaned against the lockers, completely speechless for a second. ?What the hell does all that mean??

?I will go.? Sousuke said.

?Perfect,? Kyoko said with a gigantic grin. ?You both can think of it as one lovely date!?

?WHAT?!?

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So that's the teaser. :eek:
It's the first Fanfic I've ever written online. I'll write more if it actually sounds intresting. I wish I had more time to right now, but I don't. :cry:

The basic synopsis is:

It?s Chidori?s last year of High School, and the idea of the end is not coming easily to her, especially the thought of separating from Sousuke (who she has not yet told her true feelings to). At a concert she meets a Japanese-American, much like herself, who begins to get very involved in her life. Strange things start happening and just as Sousuke?s leaving Chidori finds she needs him more than ever?and Sousuke realizes that life without Chidori is no longer an option.

I sort of wrote this on a spur because 1) there's not enough FMP fanfiction out there, and 2) there are even fewer FMP lemons out there.

So tell me how it was.

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Post by HELLFIRE »

Teaser indeed! :-D

Hey, hoping you continue to write... we've got waaay too many fics lying
around that have been (semi)abandoned since God-knows-when RIGHT
at the teaser!

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Post by Perfect Soldier »

...more please...our only other prominent FMP fanfic writers here are Hellfire, and dd, and dd only writes action for the most part. -__-; No offense, dd. So please, for the love of god keep writing. Your grammar and puncuation are really good, you actually know how to write unlike a lot of other fanfic noobs. So thank you! And write more.

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Post by pilot03 »

I like where this is going. Yes indeed. I must have more. Keep up the good work! :salute:
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