Hummm, . . .
I'm not sure if there's anything specific I would like to see, but that probably comes from the fact that I still haven't been able to read Dracula. I just like the way things are going so far with it, * Although an update is anxiously awaited

* You seem to have the characters down, *Like always* and although you said you were struggling with the first person thing, the story flowed smoothly.
What I think you should do with it? Well, . . . if your stuck where you are now, maybe a flash to the presant is in order?

Alucard looking back at his past perhaps? *Sigh* Then again, maybe not.
Hope that helps, I really did try to think up something constructive!
~Eden
"We seem dead set on turning ourselves into little monsters, don't we? Wonder why that is? It's all the rage all of a sudden. And all of us, is sooo busy running around, trying to beat each other to the finish line that no one notices the big sign from God that says : Stop-Messing-with-my-Stuff." Doc Conners - Ultimate Spiderman Volume 3
The dust bunnies and the plot bunnies are conspiering, . . . I think thats why I keep loosing all my socks.