The Perfect Weapon... Chapter Two NC-17

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Faye Faye
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Post by Faye Faye »

Relena is one, kick ass, dominating bitch with attitude! If I were Heero, I'd be all over her like white on rice too. You characterized them both really well, the sexual tension and physical descriptions were perfect and hot! Great work, Now I'm going to copy, paste, and replace all of the places where it says "Relena" with "Chevelle" (being my name) MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

LOVED it!!!!!!!

Faye Faye
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Post by Wingnut »

What surprised me is that the mirror in that room didn't fog up completely after all that. *_*
It figures that it would be someone like Dorothy that put that idea in her head. :roll:
A very well done piece. Although I can't help wondering if Trowa knew what she was up to.
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Post by Lacey »

Oh hot damn!

So that wasn't the most eloquent response, but what else can I say Loyce? I come back from a multi-month hiatus of 1xR *smacks self* and this is the first thing I read. The best ending to welcome back any BI fan that has seemed to have fallen off the face of the earth. (i.e. me) :-?

Relena kicks all butt. And Heero's a shexy man. Reading that ending reminded me of why I love those two. Great stuff. :D
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Post by Oyuki »

ah! they both got what they wanted! good! there was just too much tension between those two. lol. it was gr8!
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Post by Fatimai1 »

THAT was a bit expected... :wink:
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