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Remembering Earth 1

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Well, while I look for my Gundam Wing/Pern crossover(it's in some disk, sure :wink: ), here's another fic about Pern. This one isn't finished, but I'd like you gave your opinion or ideas about how to go ahead.

If you don't like it, say to me, too. Bad critics are allowed :o !

Disclaimer: As you suppose, I don't own Pern world or any topics about it. All of them belong to Anne McCaffrey( I hope having written surname correctly!)

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Noise of fight

That night, the child woke up hearing noise of fight again, like other nights. Out of the hospital, all was quiet, stars were shining, and the summer weather was splendid. However, the little child could hear clearly the poweful flappings of wings, the dare roars, the shouts of the men who were attempting to stop the beasts, all those mixed things became a mess...but there was nothing out of the hospital.

The little child?s dream was lively and detailed, as if he were watching TV: two huge golden beasts were alone in a shining, blue sky, apparently quarrelled in a mortal combat. Suddenly, the image changed and you could see an erosioned mountain, which had a big central hole and plenty of caves. The child realized that it was a volcano...but the volcano was off and people were in the mountain?s original terraces; the image changed again and the people in the volcano became nearer: they were making faces, shouting and pointing at the sky, where the combat had entered in a dramatic moment: one of the big beasts had its neck caught by the other one?s jaws. Suddenly, the trapped beast roared and....

A long tests list proved no odd things; what is more, doctors had attempted mental tests, although the child was too young to be mad: nothing gave any tracks. All mental diseases were supposed to leaving some tracks, but only a strong Talent had been able to be detected in the mental tests, but his owner was so young that it was impossible to know what it was or how it worked.
However, what the doctor worried a lot was that the dreams were repeated and remembered by the child in a frightening way...

But this night is different. Instead of his dreams? pattern, when the child slept again, that particular dream comes to him, but it doesn`t seem to be a movie, now the child is really there; he sees himself in the volcano?s original terraces and at this moment, he is looking at up too, he is hearing the sounds, it?s the first time that he is understanding the words, but they have nonsense to him- go up, Ramoth, go up! Pridith is flying too!..........take control of your queen, girl, if you really are a WeyrLady!.......Canth! Canth!............but the child feels that all those things are happening now, in another place...

Warning. Warning.Warning...suddenly, the child gets up, goes out of his room, goes across the games rooms, arrives to little patients? covered garden: although he had gone out of his dormitory slowly, he is running when he goes into the garden. Through the big crystal windows, he can see the station hangars are almost empty in that season. The little boy becomes quiet, he is waked up but his dream comes back and he can see the trapped beast again, he hears his death shout, he feels the moment when the beast is to jump into ?between?....and, unconciously, his mind catchs the hurt beast?s mind and he holds it, while its enemy becomes lost in the ?between?.
The child has rescued one of the beasts of his dreams, but he must put it quickly in the real world or the animal will die, too. Due to tiredness, he can?t imagine a clear picture of the volcano to send it home, so he attempts to bring it to the hangars? ground, the ground he is looking at trough the big crystal windows...

The doctor opened her eyes in astonishment but, before she could wander why she was awake if she wasn?t supposed to take care of hospital that night a painful yell broke the silence. Before it finished, the doctor was running towards the childish pavilion, tremblig with fear, although she didn?t know why. However, her fear was baseless, most children- the children they could do it- had met in one of the games rooms, and they are afraid of painful shouts, while the rest of them put themselves under the bed sheets, but everybody were allright. Only when she was taking them to the beds again, she noticed that a child hadn?t appeared, the little boy who had those strange, repetitive dreams.

Painful shouts continued, and nobody seemed to know where they came from. The doctor was completely ready in that moment, and she was looking for the disappeared boy. While she was searching, she noticed the big, powerful voice that were throwing those groans, a voice that came from somewhere out of the hospital, she thought finally. Whe she was going in the last room, she stepped on the disappeared boy?s green plush dragon. She took it and advanced.

The child had his sight in the big hangars, but he had sat on a puf and put his arms around his knees: he was breathless, as if he had been running a race. The doctor arrived beside him, she smiled, and she wanted him to go to the bed again, but he didn?t want to obey and he pointed out of the windows in a stubbornly way. Other doctors? arrival couldn?t change the child?s mind and finally, the doctor became a bit angry and she ordered to put on the hangars? grounds? lights, to demosntrate that there was nothing there.

But she had to rub her eyes and sit, like the other spectators that were in the room, when the powerful, white lights show a quadruped, winged, huge and golden creature, whose slender wings were put in any way, each one near a side of its body. A flow of deep red blood flowed from some injuries in its throat, while one of its eyes could had been in better conditions.

Finally, somebody broke the silence:
-Oh, my God, it seems a dragon.
The child agreed, he pointed at the painful creature again and said briefly:
-Wirenth.

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And well? What do you tink?

:salute: I hope your news!

Wyrth

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Post by Pearldragon2662 »

oh cool. I like this. I want to read more of this.
Touch me and you open the gate of the hell. Please me and I go easy on you. Pleasure me and well.... you'll see what will happen.

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Post by Wyrth »

Well Pearldragon2662, while I work in this fic and the other one I have in 'Gundam Wing Fanfiction'( one day of these I'll have a mess with so many stories :roll: !) you can already read the second chapter 'Remembering Earth 2', in this forum! I promise put the third one soon.

Enjoy the story!

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Wyrth
Created by the Fate,
submitted by the Fate,
waken up due to
the necessity of knowing,
conquered to answer....

and ready to fight!

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Post by Pearldragon2662 »

Yeah!!!!!!!!!
Touch me and you open the gate of the hell. Please me and I go easy on you. Pleasure me and well.... you'll see what will happen.

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