i have to live up to my title as drabble queen.. so how could i let this pass?
it's a little depressing tho...
Raine..ur so mean... i propose a much happier topic for the next one...
IM me!
anyway here it is
Shattered
1xR
115 words
It was all wrong.
The soft white curves of her warm hand were not made to grasp the hard black angles of the cold pistol. Nor was that bitter expression meant to distort the sweet features of her face.
He looked into the hateful razor sharp glare where warm forgiving pools once were. How could the same figure embody a person so obviously not who he knew her to be? But then he never did know her, nor she him. Hadn?t he broken her heart by reminding her of that very fact?
She lifted that soft hand and pointed that hard gun at him.
And before she could even pull the trigger, his heart shattered.
Shattered (drabble #7)
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miaka mouse
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Ooooh. You hurt him bad.
sniffs. I love Heero, How can I make something like this drabble?
Good work.
Elyn Yuy
sniffs. I love Heero, How can I make something like this drabble?
Good work.
Elyn YuyNever get behind a horse. One way or another they will say hello. ~Me
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NICE.
a good sour--bitter. i liked how he shattered b4. great touch.
Hee-chan needs tah take a ride in Rel's shoes 4 once. itz a good wake up call.
a good sour--bitter. i liked how he shattered b4. great touch.
Hee-chan needs tah take a ride in Rel's shoes 4 once. itz a good wake up call.
"You see, my plan is working. For it is written that 'if the wise man always appears stupid, his failures do not disappoint, and his success gives pleasant surprise."
Maggie smacked my leg. "That is not written."
"Sure it is, Imbeciles three, verse seven."
~Bif and Maggie, Lamb by Christopher Moore
Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him.
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Maggie smacked my leg. "That is not written."
"Sure it is, Imbeciles three, verse seven."
~Bif and Maggie, Lamb by Christopher Moore
Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him.
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OMG!
miaka honey, you sure live up to the title of Queen of Drabbles. this is honestly so touching. the ending just made me go, awww... har har. the other wonderful responses for this challenge made me laugh gleefully with evilness because the way they broke Heero's hearts were just plain cruel. but reading yours, it actually made me feel bad for him. and trust me, that's not something that occurs often. i would make kmf proud with my evilness. he.
of course i'll discuss the next challenge with you. collaborating on ideas with you is just too fun to pass up. we'll make it something hilarious to make up for this angsty theme i introduced. promise. but nonetheless, i must say again what a great job you did on this drabble. i applaud you and your crown which i made for you. love you to bits and pieces!
miaka honey, you sure live up to the title of Queen of Drabbles. this is honestly so touching. the ending just made me go, awww... har har. the other wonderful responses for this challenge made me laugh gleefully with evilness because the way they broke Heero's hearts were just plain cruel. but reading yours, it actually made me feel bad for him. and trust me, that's not something that occurs often. i would make kmf proud with my evilness. he.
of course i'll discuss the next challenge with you. collaborating on ideas with you is just too fun to pass up. we'll make it something hilarious to make up for this angsty theme i introduced. promise. but nonetheless, i must say again what a great job you did on this drabble. i applaud you and your crown which i made for you. love you to bits and pieces!
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