Betrayal (Drabble #7)

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Betrayal (Drabble #7)

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Disclaimer: Gundam Wing belongs to a lot of people way richer than I.
Title: Betrayal
Pairings: one sided 1xR (of course), 2xR
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 107

Betrayal

"What the-" Heero gaped at the scene before him. Relena stared back, no remorse in her eyes. Her partner, his arms around her, glared at him.
"D-Duo!" Heero's voice trembled. "Get away from her!"
The man was about to reply, but Relena shook her head. "No, Heero, he won't."
Heero leapt for him and pulled him up by the throat. "I thought you were my friend!"
"A real friend doesn't leave his friends behind," Duo said coldly.
Heero let go. "Relena, you can't-- You said you'd wait--"
"Things are different now," she said simply. She gestured to the window through which he'd entered. "Get out."
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Post by Eienvine »

Whoah! Harsh! No remorse! Relena can be so mean when she wants to. Ha ha. Serves Heero right that she hooked up with his best friend. Wahoo! I like it.
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Post by amateur_storyteller »

WAHHH! My poor little Heero/Relena heart is crushed!!!! Poor Heero-chan!!!!


BTW, what is a DRABBLE? And where do you find the challenges? Who issues them? *_*
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Post by Adaon »

If you look down the list of topics on this forum you'll see "raine_yuy" posted "Drabble Challenge #7" which contains the theme of the challenge, which is a 100 word story (up to 120) following a theme, in this case Heero's heart getting broken.
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Post by Elyn Yuy »

Ouch.

That burns. nods.

You guys are really getting him in the mean spots.

1. Relena

2. The braided bakka


good job on the drabble.

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Post by WhiteWindRRose »

hah.
sure it was gut wrenching.... but enjoyable!!!
the harsher, the better.
maybe i'm just sick that way.... :wink: :-P
HEE-CHAN MUST PAY!

*click of revolver in distance*

uh-oh. i'm out
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Post by Beck »

I could see that happening, he trying to step in where he has no right to be. Thats what you get for being a bad boy Heero *tsk tsk*
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Post by raine_yuy »

Wonderful!


I love the fact that he came through the window and Relena kicked him out the same way. That just made the impact of Relena rejection somehow more...Heero-ish. Hehe. Great job!
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