Hard to Believe-chapter 1(?)

[shadowcat]

i love it!!!!

please continue on this fic!!!!

pretty please ice princess!!!

i'll go down on my knees and beg!!

*cat

[WhiteWindRRose]

I especially loved this part

She made me proud, but as I watched her, she also made me lonely. No, I take that back, I made myself lonely. I realized that our lives were much too different for me to be so selfish as to tell her that I loved her. As I watched from the shadows, Quatre?s words came back to haunt me.

?...We?re all trying to find the strength and humanity within ourselves that we see in you...?

this one too!

But was I suddenly so weak that I couldn?t let her shine without having her shine directly on me? I couldn?t rely on her like before...

my friends... didn?t rely on me anymore, and rightfully so. We all had to find our own way. As I again turned to watch her...

I knew that I didn?t fit into her journey. I folded my arms, and my heart ached. I had no choice now but to walk away.

Because I loved her.

I can sooooo relate 2 all of that since graduation's comming...
letting go can be so hard
but change is always around the corner
::sigh::

I hope you decide to write more.
Ah! :: that was just beautiful!
I can't help but wonder where he'll go now...

anywayz, that was a great read, looking forward to more!

[RDP]

How in the world do you show a girl that you love them? I wasn’t exactly a normal teenager, so I did the only thing I knew how to do. I used a multi-billion dollar, nearly-indestructible, three-story war machine to save her life.

I love that sentence.

Wonderful character assessment of Heero, Ice Princess! In this fic you got into his head, his feelings, and showed that he is still human, no matter what facade he displays. The notion that he would like to pick on Duo for fun... usually authors display Heero as stoic and totally unfeeling, but he probrably does have a fun emotional side, even if he does keep it well hidden behind a mask of indifference most of the time. (Lena will just have to drag it out of him )

I think I saw that same site...but I cannot remember the exact title either. Was it not 'Gundam Wing is Being Fan Raped' or something similar? It had a picture of an aguished Duo... It was trying to promote tolerance of both the homosexual and heterosexual pairings which divide fans, but I...well...never could tolorate yoai much... -shudders- Anyway, great fic with rare perspective...keep it up! I will follow MBF and seek out the next chapter...

P.S. You have a nice writing style! Have you written any other 1xR fics?

[ice princess]

Hello All! This is Ice Princess here! Can I persuade you all not to read the supposed *shudder* next chapter of this fic? I had a random idea that I was toying with, but I simply don't have the patience to flesh it out the way I want, so I'm just wanting to leave this a one-shot. Trust me, you aren't missing anything if you don't read the second chapter. Maybe I'll decide to finish it someday, but for now, consider this a one-shot. Thanks to all who've written a response. They all mean so much to me!!!!


~ice princess