My Own Heaven

Lit Tenshi · Post by **Lit Tenshi** » Sat Jul 20, 2002 7:38 pm

Disclaimer: I do not own gundam wing.

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I honestly was getting too old to be woken up at such late hours. Really, people should be more courteous than to be banging on doors in an apartment building at ungodly hours. It?s indecent. Well, if I was up, I might as well go give whomever was pounding on my neighbor?s door an earful.

I put on my robe and stepped out of my apartment to see a young man pounding on the door of Duo Maxwell. I figured as much, it was not an unusual occurrence to have people barging in here to see him. Most them were quite odd, and this man was no exception. His hair hung in the most bizarre fashion. He probably gave it no thought at all instead of styling it. So I calmly cleared my throat, catching his attention.

?What?? If I hadn?t known better, I would have thought he growled at me.

?If you?re looking for Mr. Maxwell, he went to L2 to visit his girlfriend. He won?t be back for awhile.?

He frowned and muttered several obscenities, before saying a quick thank you and more swears. I began to assume that this was more important than the average people that came by looking for him. Something about his manner and the look in his eyes said that he came to see Duo for a more important reason. ?May I be of any assistance?? I asked. Little did I know what I had gotten myself into.

At first he was about to decline my offer, but then reconsidered it for a moment. I was a little more than surprised when he answered with a calm, ?Yeah. Maybe you can.?

I decided to that it would be most impolite to retract my offer, so, I stepped little further back into my room, and gestured for him to enter. This is not a very bright thing to do, but I don?t think that he wanted money, and being around fifty-seven and a widow, I did not find myself desirable. I felt myself safe enough.

He walked swiftly into my home and I lead him into my kitchen, politely offering him a drink. He declined and I sat down across from him and asked him of his troubles. His face slowly contorted and it looked like he was embarrassed or unsure, still, he stated in a fatigued manor, ?I love Relena Peacecraft.?

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Okay so I cut it short, but it?s just the prologue. I hope you like it, and remember?..REVIEW!!!!!

kmf · Post by **kmf** » Sun Jul 21, 2002 2:14 am

A very interesting start to your tale - you have my attention ^_^ I like the way you have written in the first person perspective of an older original character - I dont think I have seen that before. Please post more soon.

kmf

JK · Post by JK » Thu Oct 17, 2002 11:56 pm

This is a really great opener to your fic. I definitely want to read more about it. I'm wondering what led up to that point where Heero's actually confessing how he feels. No matter what, it sounds so funny coming from Heero that he loves Relena hehe. I'm hoping you can post more soon!! Keep up the good work.

Mara · Post by **Mara** » Fri Oct 18, 2002 2:32 pm

I love the start to this fic! I think it's amazing that when Heero planned to ask Duo for emotional advice, not a bad decision considering the all-powerful braided one has too many of them hinself, he ends up spilling his heart out to a kind old lady. It's amusing, but not in the way that most humor fics are. It also seems to have a very interesting plot evolving. I can't wait until we are able to see what's happening on Relena's side, or what made Heero realize he was in love, or simply whatever you plan on typing up next.

Patiently (not really) Awaiting Updates,
Mara

Post by **blackrose** » Sun Feb 23, 2003 2:07 am

Ack! Just the prologue??? WHERE'S THE REST OF IT???? *sobs*

More SOON! PLEASE????

Love,
Rose

suicide_baka · Post by **suicide_baka** » Sun Feb 23, 2003 2:15 am

Okay....i'm going to act very....OH Hell! Come on! Bring on the next part! I can't take it! I need to know what happens! Okay, calm down suicide_baka calm down....1..2....3..

aku_ryo · Post by **aku_ryo** » Sun Feb 23, 2003 8:24 am

whay - hay awesome okies very good opening is it all going to be told through this womans point of view that would be cool!!!!!

more!!!!!!!!!!!

aku aku

Melville's Best Friend · Sun Feb 23, 2003 12:08 pm

This, my friend, is quite cute. I don't think I've ever read a fic from someone else's POV....I like the change. Good job, there! I would enjoy to read more....so get to it! *quickly pushes Lit out of the room* Go go go go go!!! Get to it! We're all waiting!!!!!
Your friend,
Melville's Best Friend

Aieki Chan · Post by **Aieki Chan** » Thu Apr 17, 2003 10:54 pm

Very good start on your story, alot of luvies from me! I can't wait to read more.
Do you want me to rate this chapter? You know the rule, 1 is bad to 5 is great.

Lets see....I give you a ......

...5.9!!!!!!

shadowcat · Post by **shadowcat** » Sat Apr 19, 2003 3:52 am

Wow!!!

A execellent start!! you know what comes right after a great start?? A great finish!!

I'm waiting for it!!!

**cat

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