Wow...I found it disturbing at first---especially what happened to Relena. The way you wrote that scene was just...wow. Could she even survive from something like THAT?
Well, the ending was nice. Had a softer feel compared to everything else.
Good job.
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A beautiful story about a horrible thing, I agree, a sequel is in order. And don?t mind me here, but could a human being really survive that. I mean it was very descriptive about really hacking away at the insides of a female body. It just sounds like the conditions they were in wouldn't let Relena survive after she was carved up like that. However I admire your work. You have the ability to freeze a persons thought and consume them with your own.
"God made men the stronger sex plainly because women are dangerous and the men needed to protect themselves somehow."- Me
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" The 90's are killing me. I shouldn't have done that. You're not supposed to tell a guy you're gonna kill him no more. I got to tiptoe through the tulips with these assholes. Taking all the fun out of the job." -Papa Joe, Boondock Saints
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....WOW....I am in shock. That was so amazingly written and so intense. I could see it happening and the way you wrote it made it possible to feel emotions connected to the fic itself. And the part about their child was so uplifting. Beautiful job! 
Enjoy life, relax, don't worry, and get more sleep because everything tastes like chicken in the end and chicken tastes GOOD!! 
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Ya know that thin line between genius and insanity? I'm standing on it...