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tornin1/2
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Subtle Murderer

Post by tornin1/2 »

A/N- sooooooo sorry for the mistake in BI.

Warnin- this is an angsty poem, so i just want to warn the peeps out there who don't like them or get upset by them.

hope you like it.

Subtle Murderer

If you ever went to school one day
And saw a lonely girl,
Sitting on an empty bench
What would you?

If you saw her leave that bench,
And go to her locker,
And empty it all out,
What would you do?

Would you go to her?
Ask her, what up?
Or would you ignore it?
Does it happen everyday?

If she usually went home the same way you do,
But this time took a different route,
What would you do?
Would you follow her?

Say you follow her,
See her by a bridge,
The one that crazed man once jumped off,
Would you get worried?

Would you get help?
Or would you run away?
Go on home?
Think, “it happens everyday?”

Say you go home,
You didn’t really care,
Didn’t like her anyway
What do you care?

The next day at school,
An announcement is made.
A girl died, yesterday.
She jumped off a bridge,
Y’now, the one that crazed man jumped off.

They tell you her name.
Everyone gasps, including you.
You recognise it.
You knew that girl,
She used to go to
Your elementary school.

You weep and you cry,
You moan and you groan.
You could have done something,
To stop it.

Shut up you hypocrite!
What you crying for?
You never liked her anyway!
What if I told you she died cos of you?

You’re one of the many,
That bullied her you!

Never thought you’d be the cause,
For such a miserable death,
Never thought you’d be the one,
To make her hate herself!

Well that’s just your problem,
You just don’t think!
Just wanna ask one more question.
Who’s you next victim?

A/N- I hate it when people get bullied, it's happened to me and a number of people i know. So hopefully, if anyone reads this, they'll think twice about being mean to someone. Cos it hurts. A lot.

tornin1/2
Last edited by tornin1/2 on Thu Jun 05, 2003 6:10 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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Post by cHiMes »

i like this one tornin....still sounds good reading it the second time through
"When I was suffering, you were there behind me" Anon....unless i made it up...

"If she dies, the World Nation and this false peace will disappear. Relena, I'll destroy you."

"Zero won't tell me. Wufei, tell me, how many more times do I have to kill that girl and her dog? Tell me, Wufei." [Heero]

You can find me on Gaia online as Melicent....
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Post by tornin1/2 »

thanx :D i changed a bit as you probably can see.
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

cHiMes
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Post by cHiMes »

did u?
"When I was suffering, you were there behind me" Anon....unless i made it up...

"If she dies, the World Nation and this false peace will disappear. Relena, I'll destroy you."

"Zero won't tell me. Wufei, tell me, how many more times do I have to kill that girl and her dog? Tell me, Wufei." [Heero]

You can find me on Gaia online as Melicent....
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Post by tornin1/2 »

:D :lol:
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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Post by demented fly »

Holy poopoo this was good.

wow. I really like the poem a lot!
yayies.
"His world is a strange one - a world not of hills and fields and flowers and men of flesh and blood, but one where people are embodied ecstasies, the colour tints from evening clouds or apocalyptic jewels, the scenery a flood of light or a background of illuminated gold."
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Post by tornin1/2 »

thanks :D :D :D
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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