Pros and Cons [ chapter two: Double Take, PART I - 4xR]

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Post by RDP »

Wow...Quatre! Well, I always thought of him as an attractive pilot...after Heero of course. I like polls, but whenever I try to vote, it has been closed! Yes, there has to be a Heero chapter. "Save the best for last"...so Heero's chappie should come last, right? =runs from Trowa fans with pitchforks= Trowa is handsome also, but I think Relena is attracted to Heero the most. ^_^ Great job, and I am eagerly awaiting Quatre Part II!
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Post by Nausica? »


* waves *

I'm on the home stretch, sweets! Quatre's chapter has been both a struggle and a pleasure to write. What am I talking about? It's still a struggle and a pleasure writing it. I'm just hung up on how to end it. I'm going after a nice transition into Heero's chapter - which as you might have guessed, is next. After that, it's Duo and then Trowa's :D

* bounces * Yay! Naus is getting somewhere...

But as before, I've come with a little preview of "Double Take, PART II." Enjoy...



excerpt of Pros and Cons, chapter two: Double Take, PART II

With his back still presented towards her, Relena ran her eyes down the strong column of Quatre's neck. She imagined she could see the fine hairs gracing it being lighted by the afternoon sun, each sliver of hair illuminating like tiny pin points of light. As her eyes went lower and were met by the blinding whiteness of his shirt, Relena closed her eyes and continued her tour of what she now called "Winner's World." She could almost see the hairs continuing down his back, getting more sparse as it reached around mid-back. She smiled dreamily, her inner romantic momentarily breaking through. It would make a delicious contrast to what must be a splendid back, a delightful creation of flat bones and smooth muscle coalescing into a tempting plane made only for the pleasure of touching and stroking. The hairs would make his back smooth to the touch, but the muscles - that could be plainly seen through the shirt, Relena noticed - would give no doubts that it was a man's back. Hardness vs. softness.

Damn it, where was that drink?


All I can say is: Mwahahaha...

* muah *


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Post by wicked »

*pokes Naus...hard*

And where, missy, is Part II of this Quatre drool fest? I have been waiting, wondering, dying for it's continuence. *taps foot* Well? Hop to it missy!

We want more sexy Quatre! We want Relena to feast her eyes on the boys and pick out all their sexiness, especially with the way you write it. I did love Wufei's chapter. And obviously I adore Quatre's.

God save us when you finally get around to Trowa!!!!!

So! *pokes again....even harder* More ficcage...NOW! ~_^

~Wicked

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Post by pilot03 »

Bump. Have to bring this back to the first page.
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Post by Nausica? »

P03: YOU ROCK.

Long live the fic that never ends-- er --gets updated!

And just for you and Wicked:


***

Relena applied a steady but gentle pull. She was careful to not cause any pain, and at length, he knelt on one knee. His posture was reminiscent of a loyal knight kneeling before his queen. Duo remained silent, but a different kind of tension held his body now.

Feeling like someone else was controlling her hand, Relena lifted the heavy braid and brought its end to her lips. Her eyes closed with the feeling. So good. Entranced, she drew the silky-soft tips over her lips and down one cheek and knew that his wide eyes followed her every movement. She felt the weight of his stare.

And the growing heat of it.

***

I should be shot for giving such a teaser :D
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Post by pilot03 »

Yes. Yes you should, but just warning shots. You can thank me later Wicked!! :cheer:
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Post by wicked »

Y'know it's highly difficult for someone, anyone really, to make me like Duo in that fashion.

One doujinshi has managed to do that. Just one. And that was seriously recent too.

And now with that teaser...so have you Naus.

For that I shall...totally NOT shoot you. I will bop P-03 on the head for the warning shots though. *bops P-03 on the head but not hard because she doesn't want to hurt the boy* See?

What this is all supposed to say is, "Thank you ever so much for being so wonderfully and deviously teasing in your fic that never gets updated."

~Wicked

P.S. And just how was I to thank you P-03???

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Post by pilot03 »

*rubs head* I don't know? NOT bop me on the head? I guess it's to late for that one. Look at it this way. All the teaser could equal one fic sooner or later!! :cheer:
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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