Dinner and Dessert Final Chapter (Rated R)

Mission briefing: KGB threatening code name WHISPERED candidates. Believed target: Kaname Chidori, 16, Tokyo, Japan.
Mission status: Critical<br>
Mission personnel: Sergeant Magjor Melissa Mao; Sgt. Kurz Weber, and Sgt. Sousuke Sagara, Arm-Slave specialist; Mission objective: To protect Kaname Chidori from KGB kidnapping plot, without alerting the Japanese gov't or target as to the identity of super-secret military organization, code-named MITHRIL. <br>
Kaname: Why are you following me?!
Sousuke: It's just coincidence.

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Post by Eden »

Glad that I finally read this, it was sooo worth it! I agree with what the others were saying about this being a great piece of FMP literature, ( and even if they didn't say it quite like that, I know it's what they meant. :-P ) and how it would be great if you decided to write more.

What was that? You said that your going to take bribes? :wink: I'm good at bribing, . . .

Well, till next time!

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Post by Perfect Soldier »

I'm new here but I really love Full Metal Panic fics and yours immediately caught my eye. I'm glad I just happened to join the day you put up the last chapter because it was spetacular. It blew my mind, you're an amazing writer. I was glad I was able to read your story.
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Post by Lady Saffir »

^_^ Loved the entire story, Rose. And glad to see that Sousuke's figured it out....now when are you going to 'help' Heero get to this point? *grin*

:lol:

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Post by Nausica? »


* blinks and sits back *

Ah... I've finally figured it out: I always wondered at your "I write Full Metal Porn!" signature. And I approve... immensely :wink:

Aside from the horizontal happies, that was a frikkin' amazing story, Rose! I've only just begun to watch FMP, and stories like this only heighten my curiosity about it. That Sousuke... so like Heero, it's freaky. Hmm... must be why I like him so much, haha.

As always, your way with words stuns me. Don't ever lose your love for anime - where would we all be without you?

* muah *


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Post by Hyper_Citrus »

Wow, the whole fic is totally awesome!! And it's a sad fact that there isn't much fanfictions about FMP out there, and I can say you made a cool story about Sousuke/Kaname... :D I love this couple! *_* (You can call it a total OBSESSION!)

I can't stand Sousuke/Tessa, partly because I greatly dislike her and find her voice extremely annoying in the dubbed episodes... Meep! *Runs away from an angry mob of Sousuke/Tessa supporters*

And yes, the similarities between FMP and GW characters are troubling, like Sousuke=Heero, Kurz=Duo, Melissa=Char (kinda), Kaname=Relena (slightly), and the background people too...
Anyway, if you decide ot write another fanfiction about them, you can count on me to support you!! :wink:
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Post by Morrighan »

Ooh.... Yay!!! *huggles the happy ending* Why couldn't they have ended the series on such a note??

Great job, Rose! :D
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Great fic!!

Post by Tevrah »

Hi! I'm new to the site, but I've been looking for some good FMP S/K fics! I have to say that this is the best one!! You stuck to the original character attitudes and responses! I just loved this fic!!
P.S. How do you feel about Kalinin and Tessa as a pair? I know he's way older than her, but when she grows up a bit, maybe? I've been toying around with how the two of them would go, and since I just love this fic, I figured I'd ask you!
Bye for now! :wink:

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Post by claudya_87 »

wow...i loved it sooo much...i wanna read more...
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Post by fallen dove »

This is the first and only chapter I have read of this story, but it was amazing. I am truly impressed and a little jealous- such literary talent you have! I look forward to reading much more of your work, good job!

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Post by Dreamingdreams »

:love: I really love it so very much. Now I need to find the begin of it. :love: I bet that they are just as good. *goes off to find the others*
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