Any Candidates for The Candidate?

[The Angry Angel]

Hidey-Ho, ya'all! ~~

I am in need of an editor/advisor for my one, single fic, "The Candidate". It is Gundam Wing, and it is five chapters long, 90% completed.

I would like someone that is willing to be a little more involved than just a spell and grammar check~~~it's already stupendous in that way. No, what I need is someone who will have a lot of ideas about how to fill in my numerous holes and just be an overall "critic" and assess my language and storyline~~ya know, make sure I've written something that's readable, understandable, enjoyable ??

Plus I'm not up against any deadlines, so anyone that comes on board will have ample time to go over my chapters. I'm really excited about what I've written so far, and am hoping someone will help me out :razz:

Private Messages are most welcome!

With love,
AA

[The Angry Angel]

A sample of The Candidate~



?What you?d rather be doesn?t matter. It?s what you are that does. And what your wife is.?

Heero frowned, looked at Lady Une searchingly. ?That?s the second time you?ve mentioned my wife.?

?You must divorce her,? said Lady Une baldly.

[TaniHissatsu]

I'd love to!

I have a lengthy sort of speech full of qualifications (ie, how fantastic I am and why you should TOTALLY have me beta your stuff), but it's kind of... tacky to put it in a forum post, so I'll just PM you. O_o