Missing by a Mile - Ch 30

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Post by Beer-monster »

Very short, but very well written. Pulled off the tradgedy masterfully without overdoing it *round of applause*

I'd like to make more witty comments but I'm slightly drunk....so I'll just say I'll be waiting for the next part and stalking Trowa with a sniper rifle.
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Post by Musiced »

Rose you're breaking my heart here!!! Such wonderful writing! BUT WHERE DID HEERO GO?! Please hurry, I gotta know :bounce: :bounce:

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Post by The Angry Angel »

Wow.............Trowa's being harpooned like JAWS....................

and just like JAWs, it's in his nature to be a bit malicious (at least in Rose's MBAM "Trowa Nature" ---- and I love her for it :oops: as we all do). Poor thing, Such hate for his natural behavior!!!! I don't think this story is actually indicating Trowa as an antagonist to HYxRP relationship -- he's helping, right?? Maybe he did put the recording to the phone, but with good intent so as to save their relationship for more trying times to come. When one individual - Heero - is still hazy about what he feels, the couple would die after the "now" frenzy ended. But this way, they (he) will get some clarity and decide if he wants to step back completely (surely not!!) or charge and reclaim what is rightfully his: the girl ((read: trophy wife))).
And, as is trademark of Trowa and all Gundam Pilots, they teach each other the hard way because that way, the lesson sticks better

I really like how Duo stuck by Heero and didn't proceed to lecture and tonguelash and say "I told you so" at this point in the game.

Have the G-boys become divided over this relationship break?? Heero and Duo on one side; Trowa and Wufei on the other............Quatre in the middle?? Torn as always :x


Go Rose!! This story is shining!! You can be my WARLORD any day, and I will die for you!!!!!!!!
Rose: :eek: "..................kay." ......................................
*suddenly a wicked grin* ~think: ah...... another expendable toy soldier~
AA: surely I'm more than that? I have special furor skills - simply use a trigger word, and my sight will go red on any target you need shredded :wink:
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Post by The Angry Angel »

Rose: Sure Thing!! Let me see here...........trigger word: Bunny.
Target: Agent Trowa Barton


AA: :eek: EXCEPT THAT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rose: Bunny.

AA: Oh no. Oh no, oh no, oh no.................Trowa, darling, I'll come to funeral when I wake up. :cry:
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Post by Stellar-Soldier »

Hm.... if I were in Heero's shoes, I would have to say that whatever humanity that was left in my body, has just snapped. It does seem that Trowa wasnt the one who played the tape that started it all.. but I still have some doubts. This situation would leave Relena completely open to Trowa's advances now, since the 'perfect soldier' is basically terminated from the Preventers. Although it would be a little rediculious, I would have to bring back Wing Zero into the story, (if anything the surviving super structure), just to serve as some sort of piece of flash back material. But.... if Wing Zero were to really come into the picture, I wouldn't mind that either. I think its time for Trowa and Heero to duke it out now.. if not a mobile suit fight, perhaps hand to hand, cause the situation seems to be getting to a point where it would make sense for such a conflict.

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Post by star fighter »

This chapter was so touching, Rose. Relena's letter brought me to tears. I can't wait to see how you're going to fix this situation. I would write more but I'm feeling kind of depressed now :( I'm looking forward to the next chapter :bounce:

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Post by TwinSoul.239 »

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: oooohhhhhhhh..........poooooooorrrrrrr heeeeeeeerrooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

why can't he juz say that he loves her???????????????? :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
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