Very short, but very well written. Pulled off the tradgedy masterfully without overdoing it *round of applause*
I'd like to make more witty comments but I'm slightly drunk....so I'll just say I'll be waiting for the next part and stalking Trowa with a sniper rifle.
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Have you had your recommended daily allowance of ravishing?
I believe in love stories but despise romances.
I want to write fics that slap all the standard fanfiction conventions around the face with
a wet fish and call them Betsy ~ me to Wicked.
Cupid's arrow is really a nuclear warhead...it leaves total devastion in it wake.
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I believe in love stories but despise romances.
I want to write fics that slap all the standard fanfiction conventions around the face with
a wet fish and call them Betsy ~ me to Wicked.
Cupid's arrow is really a nuclear warhead...it leaves total devastion in it wake.
http://www.fanfiction.net/~beermonster
http://www.rakhal.com/florestica/beermonster/index.html
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Wow.............Trowa's being harpooned like JAWS....................
and just like JAWs, it's in his nature to be a bit malicious (at least in Rose's MBAM "Trowa Nature" ---- and I love her for it
as we all do). Poor thing, Such hate for his natural behavior!!!! I don't think this story is actually indicating Trowa as an antagonist to HYxRP relationship -- he's helping, right?? Maybe he did put the recording to the phone, but with good intent so as to save their relationship for more trying times to come. When one individual - Heero - is still hazy about what he feels, the couple would die after the "now" frenzy ended. But this way, they (he) will get some clarity and decide if he wants to step back completely (surely not!!) or charge and reclaim what is rightfully his: the girl ((read: trophy wife))).
And, as is trademark of Trowa and all Gundam Pilots, they teach each other the hard way because that way, the lesson sticks better
I really like how Duo stuck by Heero and didn't proceed to lecture and tonguelash and say "I told you so" at this point in the game.
Have the G-boys become divided over this relationship break?? Heero and Duo on one side; Trowa and Wufei on the other............Quatre in the middle?? Torn as always :x
Go Rose!! This story is shining!! You can be my WARLORD any day, and I will die for you!!!!!!!!
Rose:
"..................kay." ......................................
*suddenly a wicked grin* ~think: ah...... another expendable toy soldier~
AA: surely I'm more than that? I have special furor skills - simply use a trigger word, and my sight will go red on any target you need shredded
and just like JAWs, it's in his nature to be a bit malicious (at least in Rose's MBAM "Trowa Nature" ---- and I love her for it

And, as is trademark of Trowa and all Gundam Pilots, they teach each other the hard way because that way, the lesson sticks better
I really like how Duo stuck by Heero and didn't proceed to lecture and tonguelash and say "I told you so" at this point in the game.
Have the G-boys become divided over this relationship break?? Heero and Duo on one side; Trowa and Wufei on the other............Quatre in the middle?? Torn as always :x
Go Rose!! This story is shining!! You can be my WARLORD any day, and I will die for you!!!!!!!!
Rose:

*suddenly a wicked grin* ~think: ah...... another expendable toy soldier~
AA: surely I'm more than that? I have special furor skills - simply use a trigger word, and my sight will go red on any target you need shredded

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Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
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Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
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Rose: Sure Thing!! Let me see here...........trigger word: Bunny.
Target: Agent Trowa Barton
AA:
EXCEPT THAT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rose: Bunny.
AA: Oh no. Oh no, oh no, oh no.................Trowa, darling, I'll come to funeral when I wake up.
Target: Agent Trowa Barton
AA:

Rose: Bunny.
AA: Oh no. Oh no, oh no, oh no.................Trowa, darling, I'll come to funeral when I wake up.

The Angry Angel
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
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Hm.... if I were in Heero's shoes, I would have to say that whatever humanity that was left in my body, has just snapped. It does seem that Trowa wasnt the one who played the tape that started it all.. but I still have some doubts. This situation would leave Relena completely open to Trowa's advances now, since the 'perfect soldier' is basically terminated from the Preventers. Although it would be a little rediculious, I would have to bring back Wing Zero into the story, (if anything the surviving super structure), just to serve as some sort of piece of flash back material. But.... if Wing Zero were to really come into the picture, I wouldn't mind that either. I think its time for Trowa and Heero to duke it out now.. if not a mobile suit fight, perhaps hand to hand, cause the situation seems to be getting to a point where it would make sense for such a conflict.
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