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by Darkwing
Tue May 30, 2006 4:04 am
Forum: Melodrama
Topic: Caveat Emptor - Chapter VIII
Replies: 20
Views: 9194

You say that this chapter is nothing special, but as I told you not all the parts of a book can be full of action. This chapter could be defined as a transition passage, but it perfectly accomplishes to its task. It leaves the reader hanging, wondering what's going to happen next. What will Quinze ...
by Darkwing
Tue Jan 10, 2006 8:40 am
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 7/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Epilogue
Replies: 9
Views: 2825

:D I'm so happy that you had fun with it that I'm speechless! I'm just surprised that you guys liked this story that I don't know what to say except thank you!

Aaaand, no. I won't write a one-shot to show how Quatre proposal went. I didn't want to be too intrusive of their privacy and so I'll let ...
by Darkwing
Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:08 am
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: 4xD] 6/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 5
Replies: 5
Views: 2013

Your initial chapters were faily well written, but this chapter is a veritable shipwreck in terms of grammar. You desperately need an editor. I don't understand why your grammatical usage could degrade so much from chapter to chapter. It's as if you wrote it in another language and threw it in ...
by Darkwing
Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:32 am
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 7/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Epilogue
Replies: 9
Views: 2825

[4xD] 7/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Epilogue

Standard disclaimers: See first chapter
Author note: I apologize for the long time gap between this and the previous post. I didn't mean to let you hang there, but if something could happen in my life?well?it happened! Eheheheh?
But now I'm here, with the final chapter of this ficlet that obtained ...
by Darkwing
Tue Dec 13, 2005 3:16 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: 4xD] 6/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 5
Replies: 5
Views: 2013

4xD] 6/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 5

Standard disclaimers : See first chapter.

Author note : Thank you so much for the review, Takisha! I don't know if this is how you guessed that they might fix their issues, but?please enjoy! ^_^

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The most noble of weaknesses
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by Darkwing
Thu Dec 08, 2005 4:07 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 5/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 4
Replies: 2
Views: 1131

[4xD] 5/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 4

Standard disclaimers: See first chapter.

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The most noble of weaknesses
By Darkwing
Chapter four

To say that they had a dream day was an euphemism and this was why the only acceptable way to end with a flourish was a good dinner ...
by Darkwing
Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:59 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 4/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 3
Replies: 3
Views: 1324

*giggles* Well...I always thought that Dorothy might act a little coy, so I'm glad that you don't think 'this' Dorothy out of character.

I'm sorry if you preferred her unequivocally sexy. I made that choice to underline her ambiguous personality, that can appear neat and graceful, but also dark and ...
by Darkwing
Mon Dec 05, 2005 3:47 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 4/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 3
Replies: 3
Views: 1324

[4xD] 4/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 3

Standard disclaimers : See first chapter.

Author note : I apologize with all the readers for the delay. I didn't mean to make you wait, but life lately forced me to keep my mind busy elsewhere. I hope the wait will be worthy, but in any case, thanks for being here ...
by Darkwing
Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:08 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 3/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 2
Replies: 2
Views: 1187

[4xD] 3/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 2

Standard disclaimers : See first chapter.

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The most noble of weaknesses
By Darkwing

Chapter two

She had openly challenged him. Quatre could perfectly understand this even if, for a strange reason, he had never completely understood ...
by Darkwing
Mon Nov 21, 2005 3:20 pm
Forum: Believe Your Love Fanfiction Showcase
Topic: [4xD] 2/7 "The most noble of weaknesses" Chapter 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1987

Lovely!!!
You posted again!
I loved Ivana, such a cute and smart little girl!

LOL! Yes, she was lovely also in real life and she was such a volcano that she even broke my nose with a jump, while we were playing! LOL She's probably a little lady now, but right then, she was such a pretty and ...

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