Blissful Ignorance

Thanks...I'm glad the other parts were a little better. I actually meant for part one to end there but I had some ideas. Sorry if it was harder to follow. Hopefully I'll keep improving as I go.

Here's another part...it's gettin there...

Don't own the show....I wish...*Snivvel

Tell me how you think I'm doin....not great I'm sure but still...let me know how you think I can improve...

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The breeze was cool as the two figures sat at a table outside a small caf ...

RECOMMENDED: Read part 1 of "To Belong." Not essential but could make more sense if you do.

I own nothing but ideas.

I decided to continue with this fic whether anyone likes it or not. I liked the storyline (although so far there's a lot of talking and little action). But I have a plan hehehe ...

I loved this piece, I must say. You kept the characters true to form and the writing style is beautiful! Awesome job.

To Belong

I own nothing but the arrangement of these words and the ideas they betray. And they probably
aren't worth much (Except maybe reviews...I hope!)



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Duo reached an arm out, wrapped his fingers around a long pipe protruding from the
depths of the ...

Is this really necessary? No, seriously?does anyone find it feasible that I am brilliant enough to write a popular, million dollar anime series yet
am also sitting here and using said brilliance on simple
(not to mention free) fanfiction instead of selling my ideas for more millions? Hehe...I didn ...