Blissful Ignorance

I removed them as you asked, Rose. Sorry, I didn't know.

lol, thank ya's for the compliment! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I'm sorry to say that I can't exactly answer your question. You, as the reader get to decide who he's in love with. Whether it be some character in the anime or some OC...it's what you make of it. I intended for that...since I only have 7 ...

Thank you! I'm happy someone liked it. And thanks to those who posted a review to it in my ff.net account. I haven't been online recently and their comments really helped me.

~EDS

? Thinking ?
? Speaking ?
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Flash backs or dream sequences
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Description: Written for Black Rose?s (I?m sure it involved a few other authors, but I can?t find the post, so I don?t know) 99 ways to propose to Relena. I know I?m way off course about ...

?Thinking?
?Speaking?
Flashbacks or dream sequences
//Song lyrics//
*** =Different Scene

Description: This is my first Fruits Basket fic, hopefully it won?t be my last. What did Shigure really see in his dream? And what fortune does it hold for his future? I have been wanting to write something ...

lol, thanks for your help. I have a basic idea of how I want it to go, but it's being stuborn. *laughs* Your posts helped a bunch, thanks again.

~EDS

trekkiexb5 is right, if you want a specific style you should focus on what sort of ?vibe? or ?mood? you want the story to reflect.

Romance Novel Air?
?Heated kisses and chaste movements shifted their entangled bodies, slowly but surely onto the bed. Their tongues danced among the parted lips, each ...

thanks calla, you're right on that one. Not all poems have to be steady and tranquil...but how do you write a poem so that it isn't to lengthy or streses the meaning far more than what you want it to?

I have a lot of trouble with that.

You placed a lot of thought and detail in this one. Good job.

~EDS

Love it! Love it! Love it!