Blissful Ignorance

I like how you repeated Temptation. The word itself means something that won't go away, and repeating it maks you feel like you truely are tempted to try it again and again. You know?

This poem reminds me of that one song but Smile Empty Soul its called bottom Of A Bottle, if you've never heard it ...

Yea I know i need time away, but i don't think he realizing how I feel. I',m afraid top tell him because I'm afraid he going to turn me down yet again, and I don't know if I can take that.

fubberr wrote: Chances grow to take the way out; but that path to me is not aloud.

Allowed?

I really like the last two lines "I'll take the role and live the part;
i'll get past the cold cash and hearts" I think those two lines pretty much sums up what half the teenage angst writers feel.

You say hey
Hug me like a friend
Your smile is so sincere
Why would I think less?

We joke for hours
Talks of nothing
You never pick up
Maybe I want more

You talk like there is no care
Like that night never happened
Sometimes I wonder
If a one-night-stand with you
Would hurt less

Why can?t you ...

:o OMG! *hugs* and you were the first one to reply to my poetry!

thank you so much. I thought I had gotten over these feelings a long time ago, but then when i learn that the little ----- broke up with him I just wanted to ring her neck. He broke all his moral for her and she just err. I still don ...

aww thank you both *hugs*

Meth, its the same guy who has been doing it for the past 6 months, and I should get over it, but I can't. *sigh*

OMG! I'm back! woohooo! *dances*

:eek: I don't think anyone remembers me, but thats ok ^^

I?d Break all the rules
Drive to the end of the world
Rip out every last organ
In my bloody body
With just my fingers and thumbs
If I Knew

A Bullet wouldn?t stop me
A stab in the back wouldn?t faze me
If ...

Thank you. I just noticed I missed a verse - -;;

I recived a note a few days after school started for me. In there was the sweetie thing that it made me cry. So when I go home I wrote this. All the word are from the note. I didn't change the order they appear in and I didn't change the meaning.


If you want to
laugh
pitiful
don't kill ...

No you didn't. I love the poem, and agree with it 100%