Blissful Ignorance

if you're still interested, the first chapter of the story is posted on ffn:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2079046/1/

also... uh, i really have no idea how this beta-reader thing works... so, uh, i don't know how i'm supposed to get it to you before posting... um, yeah...

fairly new in fanfiction writing... need help with a story i'm working on currently. centered in 01xRP... multi-chaptered (approximately 5 chapters).

help please.

in all seriousness, i can take any brutal criticism so there's no need to fear having to be all nice since i'm kinda new in writing.

thanks much to all for the welcome

:pale: (terrified of introductions) um.... uh... *thinks* :D (might as well...)

greetings all ^^ i'm a newbie (duh...) and just wanted to say hiya!! ^^
i like writing fics but have never gotten around to finishing any of them - probably why i haven't posted any of them... um... i love reading ...

i love this game ^^ such a wonderful story ^^ well, since i've finished several times...
there are several endings... but i'm guessing that you want the 'perfect ending' so here:
***SPOILERS***
after defeating vegnagun and shuyin, thus reuniting shuyin with lenne, you go to the farplane glen and ...