Blissful Ignorance

the morning routine was in season 1 as well, about one third through the season i think

it's been 4 months, hmm

hey, very sweet story start here, keep going

i'll agree with Sam.... pretty good start... the more effective considering that you've only watched the first bunch of dvd's... deifnitely check out Jae's site, lots of fmp info there... and fmp-specific forums.

if you consider the fmp series openended (here's a spoiler for you: nobody dies), then ...

OH. MY. GOD.

that was a rather sweet sketch. cute

*blushes*

poor sousuke, he's so confused :o
poor kaname, for having to put up with him heh.

I'm very happy with the ending as well... It's not sappy, but rather very sweet, and it wraps up the whole FMP universe, with everyone being more or less happy. I hope you didn't copy too much from SEED tho, but I didn't watch it yet so I don't care.

Congratulations on work well done

nice ending for a good -- and long and detailed -- story

hey good job, when's the next one?

Hey, KFW, I'd be happy to proofread your work if you want me to. I have some free time this week.

Email me at stani@unitspace.com if you're interested.