Blissful Ignorance

Fumoffu is the noise that Bonta-kun makes. Kaname has a Bonta-kun doll, that doll she's tossing in the air at the end of episode 1.

Samantha, who really is working on her fic

It seems an interesting premise, but I can't read it easily due to the formatting. Could you put a blank line between each paragraph to increase readability?

Samantha

I just revised it a bit, mostly Melissa going into more detail and explaining why he is so vital, yet she'll keep an eye on this developing relationship.

Ethereale, in what ways is it too shallow?

Samantha

Disclaimer: Full Metal Panic! does not belong to me.

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Today, Yesterday and Tomorrow
Chapter 7--Inner Conflicts
By Samantha

Sousuke looked at the sleeping Kaname, a small smile on his face, but his thoughts a roiling maelstrom. I enjoyed what we just shared, he thought. It felt right, but was ...

I hate to say it, but I'm going to go on hiatus writing for a while. I'm on a depressive downturn and I predict my normal writing time (before classes begin for the day) will be taken up with simply getting myself to get up.

When I can push myself, I'm revising what I've already written for Today ...

Disclaimer: Full Metal Panic! belongs to Shoji Gatoh, not me.

A/N: Sorry catfight?s been called off. It turns out Ayame is only 11.

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Today, Yesterday and Tomorrow
Chapter 6 ? Tender Moments
By Samantha

Light filtered in to the cordoned off sleeping area, bathing Sousuke and Kaname in a cold ...

@trekkiexb5 and ethereale

Thanks for the compliments on my characterization. I'm planning some chapters to go a bit indepth inside Mao and Kurtz's minds, and probably Tessa's.

Samantha

Disclaimer: I don?t own Full Metal Panic! It belongs to Shoji Gatoh.

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Today, Yesterday and Tomorrow
Chapter 5 ? Memories
By Samantha

Sousuke rushed out the door of Kaname?s apartment, only to see her sitting on the floor, her anger evaporated. Kneeling down, he analytically noticed she was ...

I really, really like this. Please, write more, and don't worry about the fact you haven't seen through to the end of the story--you can work in the details later, that you have the general idea now. Email me if you want a short synopsis of each episode. Also, check out Jae's site, which includes ...

I met him and Monica and Greg at C-kon, and they were all very nice and interesting people. They played off eachother more than they do on tape, if possible. To see what I mean, watch Gasaraki or RahXephon (Chris and Monica), or FMP (all three, to a much lesser extent) They were hilarious at the ...