Blissful Ignorance

It took me a while to reply to this fic and I apologize. A story this good certainly deserves feedback. It's very well written for the time period. It made me feel like I was there. Good descriptive beginning also. Looking forward to the rest!

Crystal

You left a lot of open ends but still told a story. That's impressive with the word limit. If you want to tie up the loose ends by turning this into a full fic, I wouldn't mind. ^__- Just as it stands though is good enough. It allows the reader to use their imagination a bit with what you have ...

Wonderful! Especially the end, when Heero heard her thoughts. You always write their conversations so well, no matter how long or short. Thanks for sharing!

Crystal

I love Dorothy in this! You have captured her perfectly from the series. As for her idea concerning Relena, I think it will have a different effect. I see Relena becoming more independent soon. I'm curious to see how you'll have Relena enter her new duty as Queen. As for Relena riding with Heero ...

This is my first time posting a reply so hopefully I'm doing it correctly. I've been wonderfully drawn into your plot you are so skillfully weaving. What Heero said at the very end was perfectly in character for him. Instead of comforting Relena, he gave her the cold, hard truth. I can't wait to see ...