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blackrose Warlord, er Commander of the 1xR Brigade Joined: 08 Mar 2002 Total posts: 2246 |
 Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 10:01 pm Post subject: Lingering (Series) Rated NC-17 |
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Lingering consciousness, her taste lingering on his lips. The Zero system was the ultimate weapon, but the pilot paid a terrible price: his sanity.
Anguish dug into his chest, throbbing like an infected wound. Contaminated agents wound their way through the smallest capillaries, spreading disease to every cell, nourishing his body with promised death. Rage frothed on his skin like grimy puss.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”
He sliced and cut, his entire core thrown into metallic confines of the suit. Zero responded fluently, tearing flesh and crunching metal in a frenzied pace set by the desolate pilot nestled inside. Fervent battle raged as space erupted into the physical, fiery incarnation of hell.
War was hell, and Zero the forever agony of a tortured soul.
“Give me the controls, and I can take away your nightmares…”
“No.”
“I can end your pain…”
“I can’t tell what’s … I can’t see…what’s REAL anymore!”
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| shadowcat Bishounen Strip Club Special Guest Location: *blank smile* Gender: Female |
| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 3:04 am Post subject: Reply |
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Very very very very very well written!!!!!!! 
It's like a beautiful retell of the whole series!!!!
what an amazing story, beautifully written and it was just amazing,i just can't describe it
Shadowcat
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| zapenstap Joined: 13 Apr 2002 Total posts: 262 |
| Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 6:05 am Post subject: |
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| Rose, did i ever tell you i love this? I can't remember if i have, but i do. It incorporates images from the series so beautifully and is so intensely written. I really really love it. I ought to be able to say more in praise of it, but it's 3 am and my brain is fried. i had a rough day. Anyway, it's gorgeous.
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| melrose_stormhaven A puddle under the tire of the procrastination truck Location: smexing the night away...in fanfics, of course Age: 25 Gender: Female |
| Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 6:56 am Post subject: |
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| beautiful...as always!
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| Wingnut Joined: 17 Oct 2003 Total posts: 875 Location: Royal Oak, MI Age: 27 Gender: Male |
| Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 11:12 pm Post subject: |
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| So he finally broke free from the Zero system in the end after all. Good, that system can be more trouble than it is worth. It also seems to be a bit of a hentai. Either it or Heero is when it comes to Relena.
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| Andrea I owe Rose GOOD 1xR smut Joined: 27 Mar 2003 Total posts: 2121 Location: 95% M.I.A. Age: 24 Gender: Female |
| Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2003 2:11 am Post subject: |
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| This was the first story I read from you... and I just felt the urge to read it again... So beautiful, and deep.
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| Oyuki Fanfic demi-goddess Joined: 07 Nov 2003 Total posts: 206 Location: the bay area, nor*cal Age: 26 Gender: Female |
| Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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| aah! i've always loved this! his emotions are so deep! he suffers so damn much! this is so good!
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| Chibi-sitter |
| Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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I like the way you gave Wing Zero & Epyon character, though I'll never look at em the same way again 
and as always I love the way you write Heero
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| Raspberry Anime Junkie Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Total posts: 1234 Location: If Hell is The Deepest South, than I am at the bottom! Age: 19 Gender: Female |
| Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2004 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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| Beautiful. Just beautiful. Heero IS sensitive, and you made it clear. Very well written. Great job!
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| Cinthya_Dee Plotting nightly on how to 'get' Kyo Age: 22 Gender: Female |
| Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:26 pm Post subject: |
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Wow!!!!! that was intense. You described Heeros feelings exceptionally well. The metaphors you used were great. I wish there was more writen but it is fine the way it is. you had me lost at first but then I understood. Great Story.
Cinthya_Dee 
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